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This is where I want to always be,
I’d love to freeze a pure moment in time,
Making this piece of life forever mine.

Never wanting to face the norm,
As my dear heart is weak & worn,
It has felt the strain of my turbulent life,
Barely pulled through all the grief & strife.

If I could make the world stop turning,
Would it ease my intense burning?
Or would the hurt still turn me to ashes,
As I witness heartache as it crashes.

Things are much better when they are froze,
My weeping willow becomes a mighty rose,
Nothing can break through to my core,
Things are much easier to ignore.

Like the pain & anguish of every day,
You can turn your back & just walk away,
If I had the power to freeze my world,
That would make m a very happy girl.

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Frozen Fantasy

Contributed by pixie on Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 12:50:14 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I live in a frozen fantasy,
This is where I want to always be,
I’d love to freeze a pure moment in time,
Making this piece of life forever mine.

Never wanting to face the norm,
As my dear heart is weak & worn,
It has felt the strain of my turbulent life,
Barely pulled through all the grief & strife.

If I could make the world stop turning,
Would it ease my intense burning?
Or would the hurt still turn me to ashes,
As I witness heartache as it crashes.

Things are much better when they are froze,
My weeping willow becomes a mighty rose,
Nothing can break through to my core,
Things are much easier to ignore.

Like the pain & anguish of every day,
You can turn your back & just walk away,
If I had the power to freeze my world,
That would make m a very happy girl.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-08-24 12:50:14]
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Re: Frozen Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by artostuff on Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 12:55:43 PM AEST
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I like this. It was really a delightfull read. Thank you for sharing.

Re: Frozen Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 01:09:08 PM AEST
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I like all of your poetry but this is by far the best poem I have ever read !! my favorite line was " My weeping willow becomes a mighty rose." Sometimes I have a perfect moment in life and wish that it can stay that way forever ! Why must life drastically change?
Does it change for the better.... because sometimes it all seems far worse.!?
Keep up the woderful writes.
ALINA

Re: Frozen Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by reilt on Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 02:01:19 PM AEST
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great poem. you are sooooo talented.

Re: Frozen Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 05:13:55 PM AEST
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You get better and better hun..

AfterDark..

Re: Frozen Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 06:39:26 PM AEST
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i feel much the same lately; absolutely beautiful write:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Frozen Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 07:13:15 PM AEST
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beautiful poem pixie I enjoyed it

Brandy

Re: Frozen Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by SweetRhythm on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 04:01:24 AM AEST
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Another great write Pixie, the passion for what you feel is so well portrayed, you really gave this one your all, an excellent write, I enjoyed it a lot.

Corinna

Re: Frozen Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 03:46:01 PM AEST
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barely pulling through hopefully makes us stronger even if we remain jaded...I feel your emotional torture.

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