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Array ( [sid] => 61197 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hello Maria...... [time] => 2004-08-24 01:57:07 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Hello, is that you my love Maria
Please talk to me without keeping silent
Your silence could make my heart break
I know you are angry for what I have done
But forgive me my love I was drunk yesterday

Hello, are you there my love Maria
Please talk to me without crying
Your cry makes my heart cry more than you
I know you don't want to talk to me now
But forgive me my love I was drunk yesterday

Hello, are you listening to me, my love Maria
Please talk to me without have worries in your heart
Your worries makes my heart melt more than you
I know you don't want me any more
But forgive me my love I was drunk yesterday

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka

Copyright @2004 Ravi Sathasivam

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Hello Maria......

Contributed by ravisada on Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 01:57:07 AM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

Hello, is that you my love Maria
Please talk to me without keeping silent
Your silence could make my heart break
I know you are angry for what I have done
But forgive me my love I was drunk yesterday

Hello, are you there my love Maria
Please talk to me without crying
Your cry makes my heart cry more than you
I know you don't want to talk to me now
But forgive me my love I was drunk yesterday

Hello, are you listening to me, my love Maria
Please talk to me without have worries in your heart
Your worries makes my heart melt more than you
I know you don't want me any more
But forgive me my love I was drunk yesterday

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka

Copyright @2004 Ravi Sathasivam

Copyright © ravisada ... [ 2004-08-24 01:57:07]
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Re: Hello Maria...... (User Rating: 1 )
by stone_devil on Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 06:33:31 PM AEST
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great write ....i hope she forgives you, but my boyfriend told me over an over than being drunk isnt an excuse. keep writing

Re: Hello Maria...... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 04:56:52 AM AEST
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Okay..
ravi, I think this is among the top pieces of yoru poetry..
Very heartfelt, honest, and well, almost soul-searching...
And of course sweet and remorseful (is there such word?)
Beautiful...
~kate

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