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[title] => Cold Feet?
[time] => 2004-08-23 07:29:12
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Is it cold feet that keeps you away?
Is this the reason you couldn’t stay?
Is this why you ignore us so?
Since of our love you now know
Could it be your heart felt the same?
Your plans saying you couldn’t play the game
Your life mapped out to rule of thumb
Love now, just can’t become
The darkness you’ve made me see
The hurt… the pain… the misery
Does it matter at all to you?
That we are here down and blue
Did we maybe read you wrong?
Was it our fault all along?
One thing I’ll say before I go
I wish the truth to us you’d show.
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Cold Feet?
Contributed by
Mick_Puttock
on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 07:29:12 AM in AEST
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Is it cold feet that keeps you away?
Is this the reason you couldn’t stay?
Is this why you ignore us so?
Since of our love you now know
Could it be your heart felt the same?
Your plans saying you couldn’t play the game
Your life mapped out to rule of thumb
Love now, just can’t become
The darkness you’ve made me see
The hurt… the pain… the misery
Does it matter at all to you?
That we are here down and blue
Did we maybe read you wrong?
Was it our fault all along?
One thing I’ll say before I go
I wish the truth to us you’d show.
Copyright ©
Mick_Puttock
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2004-08-23 07:29:12]
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Re: Cold Feet?
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by venkat on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 07:35:30 AM AEST
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| Oh..Mick..its a very moving write..venkat |
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 07:50:09 AM AEST
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| Yeah! now this is what i like to see. Nicly done Mick! |
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Re: Cold Feet?
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 08:24:08 AM AEST
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Awww Mick...I know the pain you and the tribe are going thru....... I wish things would have worked out differently... Very moving write.....
Hugs
Jen |
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Re: Cold Feet?
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by Kie on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 08:49:17 AM AEST
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I am so sorry to hear that you & your family are going thru a difficult time. Your poem really touched my heart and I will keep you in my prayers.
Kie |
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Re: Cold Feet?
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by purplestary on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 10:25:09 AM AEST
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| this is an amazing write! |
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Re: Cold Feet?
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by pixie on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 12:06:49 PM AEST
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a very pained write, well expressed, great flow,
pixie xx |
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Re: Cold Feet?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 12:53:00 PM AEST
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A broken friendship is like shards of glass that pierce our souls. We bleed in pain and sorrow, and are left to clean up the peices. May you find comfort in a TRUE friend, because it seems obvious this was/is no TRUE friend. Many blessing go out to you!
Angel always...joni |
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Re: Cold Feet?
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by sweetangeluk on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 01:58:25 PM AEST
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Mick that was so wonderful yet so sad
Sorry this has happened to you and your family
Hope things get better for you
Love Sweetangelukxxxxx |
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Re: Cold Feet?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 04:27:12 PM AEST
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Lots of questions....I hope you get your answers for piece of mind, even if they atren't what you want to hear.
Well written, yet painful write. |
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Re: Cold Feet?
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 10:10:54 PM AEST
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| AAAWW Mick my heart aches for you! Maybe the pacage deal was too much for her to handle its like that sometimes! You'll find someone I know! Christina |
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Re: Cold Feet?
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 05:18:13 AM AEST
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Dear Mick ... Cold feet - oh yes, I know how painful it is to be hoping, wondering and waiting, and it seems like forever ... If only a bomb would explode under their itchy, unsure feet - just a few honest heartfelt words would be the best recipe for the day ... I truly hope you receive those words, no matter how difficult to hear, because in the end we all need peace of mind ... hopefully she will realise the road she should be travelling - yours.
Jan |
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Re: Cold Feet?
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 07:20:08 AM AEST
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Beautifully written with so much sad feeling within each word, You unveiled a story and an emotional one at that.
Awesome poem and thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Cold Feet?
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by emystar on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 04:11:51 AM AEST
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Very sad but great writing.
I can certainly say I know the feelings.
luv, many huggs,
emy |
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Re: Cold Feet?
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by Craze on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 01:46:09 PM AEST
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| this poem doesn't make any sense dude |
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Re: Cold Feet?
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by needledancing on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 10:48:43 PM AEST
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| A painful write. Thank you for sharing and may things grow lighter as time passes. |
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