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Array ( [sid] => 61080 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Automn Wind [time] => 2004-08-22 23:59:06 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The silohuette set against this canvas sunrise,
Reminds me of the lonliness that's mine.
Your perfect beautiful eyes are calling me
To find a way to you.
This was YOUR canvas on display,
Ran thru the projector.
The analog audio was lost,
Caught up in your loophole theory.
So how long will I stay here,
To suffer inside your paintbrush?
Bleeding on your canvas,
Screaming for an intervention.
The price you put on love,
Will get me one more round.
The shot echoes in my head,
As the smoke dances thru my hair.
I just wanted you to know,
I died that night,
And my love left like an Automn wind. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 22 [informant] => deadreckoning1983 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Automn Wind

Contributed by deadreckoning1983 on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 11:59:06 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

The silohuette set against this canvas sunrise,
Reminds me of the lonliness that's mine.
Your perfect beautiful eyes are calling me
To find a way to you.
This was YOUR canvas on display,
Ran thru the projector.
The analog audio was lost,
Caught up in your loophole theory.
So how long will I stay here,
To suffer inside your paintbrush?
Bleeding on your canvas,
Screaming for an intervention.
The price you put on love,
Will get me one more round.
The shot echoes in my head,
As the smoke dances thru my hair.
I just wanted you to know,
I died that night,
And my love left like an Automn wind.

Copyright © deadreckoning1983 ... [ 2004-08-22 23:59:06]
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Re: Automn Wind (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 12:12:11 AM AEST
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DR, even being that the chill of death was clear in this poem, your visuals were great. I enjoyed this piece immensely.

Rita

Re: Automn Wind (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 01:07:32 AM AEST
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well woven wrods in an absolutely gorgeous image filled poem:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Automn Wind (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 02:39:45 AM AEST
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I am like in aww by this poem.

Re: Automn Wind (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 19th December 2014 @ 11:02:10 AM AEST
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Wow, like a storm gaining strength line by line.
Your pain is evident and well expressed.

So how long will I stay here,
To suffer inside your paintbrush?

Love that whole concept. Well done.

~Scorp

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