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Array ( [sid] => 6103 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => A Place [time] => 2002-11-02 19:00:00 [hometext] => This one is about a man I met online. He is really great and one of my bestfriends. It is the same man that my poem "What Do You See" was written about. [bodytext] => I know a place where we can go to be alone
A place where we can sit and admire the view
A place where we can be us and be with
each other forever
A place where we can sit in each other's arms
and never let go
A place where we aren't separated by the miles
that are between us
And most of all a place where we can
speak our minds and not worry if
someone is around
A place where we can cuddle on the sofa
all day if we wanted to
A place where we can finally be together
Maybe one day we can visit this place
But right now this place is in our hearts
And no one can take it away from us
I know a place where we can go to be alone
A place that will always be ours alone [comments] => 6 [counter] => 599 [topic] => 20 [informant] => ShadowsCloud [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InternetLove )

A Place

Contributed by ShadowsCloud on Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 07:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: InternetLove

I know a place where we can go to be alone
A place where we can sit and admire the view
A place where we can be us and be with
each other forever
A place where we can sit in each other's arms
and never let go
A place where we aren't separated by the miles
that are between us
And most of all a place where we can
speak our minds and not worry if
someone is around
A place where we can cuddle on the sofa
all day if we wanted to
A place where we can finally be together
Maybe one day we can visit this place
But right now this place is in our hearts
And no one can take it away from us
I know a place where we can go to be alone
A place that will always be ours alone

Copyright Â© ShadowsCloud ... [ 2002-11-02 19:00:00]
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Re: A Place (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 10:29:54 PM AEST
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This is so pretty
It's wonderful to have
places like this
Great write
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: A Place (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 06:11:37 AM AEST
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Great write, Cloud... I know of that place also.. :>)
Jenni

Re: A Place (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 01:03:32 PM AEST
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Lovely write again Candice,
I've tried too hard all my life to find this place, thinking I'd found it once. But this turned out to be only a mirage!
Still looking though!
Cheers for sharing this with us.

With love
Dean:-)

Re: A Place (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 04:03:56 PM AEST
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Dean, I think that you will find that place one day. I think that there is a place like this out there for all of us. I really hope that you find yours.
ShadowsCloud

Re: A Place (User Rating: 1 )
by wordsy on Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 10:34:40 PM AEST
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It is a shame that more people can't find this place. A place where dreams meet the everyday and holding hands is still okay.

a really good read,
wordsy.

Re: A Place (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 11:50:08 PM AEST
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I am glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks for the comment.

ShadowsCloud

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