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Array ( [sid] => 61019 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Death Crawls [time] => 2004-08-22 15:35:51 [hometext] => i drew a pen sketch of a spider trail blood away from its victem, thats how i came up with this story! [bodytext] => see it glisten
dipped with dew drops aglow
it seems to sparkle in the sunlight

but not all is well about this web of magic
it is a place of considered death awaits
poor forbidding creatures caught in its power

the maiden of darkness herself awaits them
just waiting for them to be blindly captured
this o so beautiful web of inhanced beauty

when the dullwitted prey are so silently caught
with in deaths claw like grasp
all they can do is struggle and pray to be set free

but not when black death is closeing in on them
then there is no hope
but for a peacefull death

death will puncher theyre skin
then drink thier vary essance
like a daytime vampire seaching for its next victim

then lady death crawls back and shrinks into the shadows
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 13 [informant] => TwEeK [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Death Crawls

Contributed by TwEeK on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 03:35:51 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



see it glisten
dipped with dew drops aglow
it seems to sparkle in the sunlight

but not all is well about this web of magic
it is a place of considered death awaits
poor forbidding creatures caught in its power

the maiden of darkness herself awaits them
just waiting for them to be blindly captured
this o so beautiful web of inhanced beauty

when the dullwitted prey are so silently caught
with in deaths claw like grasp
all they can do is struggle and pray to be set free

but not when black death is closeing in on them
then there is no hope
but for a peacefull death

death will puncher theyre skin
then drink thier vary essance
like a daytime vampire seaching for its next victim

then lady death crawls back and shrinks into the shadows




Copyright © TwEeK ... [ 2004-08-22 15:35:51]
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Re: Death Crawls (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 04:50:35 PM AEST
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I like the visuals, although I hope the mods get around to sorting your spelling out.

You opened well, and gave this piece a sense of normalcy to which you upturned well.

Keep writing.


Re: Death Crawls (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 05:11:28 PM AEST
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i really liked this...dark and creepy...awesome write....excellent job

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears


Re: Death Crawls (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 09:23:29 PM AEST
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An intense write, I'll admit Im not over keen on spiders, oh not that id kill em, just not keen, but they have their uses, at least my room is bug free lol.

Very discriptive and graphic awesome poem.

Kindragon


Re: Death Crawls (User Rating: 1 )
by flamingblade on Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 03:57:22 PM AEST
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deep, kinda disturbing, but thats what i like so...




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