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My depression has long since consumed,
Me, my soul & the good person I once was,
As this is something that sadness often does.

Even thought I am physically surrounded
Inside I feel very alone & hounded,
By my pain that cuts like a sharp knife,
This torment has always been present in my life.

To look over at me you’d never know,
That my on going fears do hurt me so,
My smile is always forced & very unreal,
Something has long broken my air tight seal.

My heart feels like a lead weight,
Head’s in bits & soul is in a state,
I secretly wish that tomorrow never comes,
That to imminent death I will succumb.

Hoping that when I rest my weary head,
This will be the last time I awaken in my bed,
That into heaven I will be finally lifted,
Then my hurt & anguish will at last be shifted.

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Feel Alone In A Crowded Room

Contributed by pixie on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 12:42:52 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I feel so alone in a crowded room,
My depression has long since consumed,
Me, my soul & the good person I once was,
As this is something that sadness often does.

Even thought I am physically surrounded
Inside I feel very alone & hounded,
By my pain that cuts like a sharp knife,
This torment has always been present in my life.

To look over at me you’d never know,
That my on going fears do hurt me so,
My smile is always forced & very unreal,
Something has long broken my air tight seal.

My heart feels like a lead weight,
Head’s in bits & soul is in a state,
I secretly wish that tomorrow never comes,
That to imminent death I will succumb.

Hoping that when I rest my weary head,
This will be the last time I awaken in my bed,
That into heaven I will be finally lifted,
Then my hurt & anguish will at last be shifted.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-08-22 12:42:52]
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Re: Feel Alone In A Crowded Room (User Rating: 1 )
by RhythmBndt on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 01:33:54 PM AEST
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I can relate :(

Re: Feel Alone In A Crowded Room (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 05:52:08 PM AEST
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Pixie, dear, it's as if you could read my mind sometimes. Honestly, when I read your poetry it's like reading my diary or something.

Wonderfully written. I love your rhymes.

Lots of love and peace be with you,

Chelsea

Re: Feel Alone In A Crowded Room (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 12:26:28 AM AEST
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Hello Pixie, Nice write.. I can feel your words spilling over. I feel often that way. But I just keep thinking positive ,Pixie, It helps.

God Bless
Whisper

Re: Feel Alone In A Crowded Room (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 07:10:13 AM AEST
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my dear your heart is now lead heavy..Aww very sad..take care honey..venkat

Re: Feel Alone In A Crowded Room (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 03:49:44 PM AEST
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As liquid sunshine said it seems like my own thoughts when I read this deep flow.

The Wind

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