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or not, and grey.

the crows will call
the crows will call...

You sit inside
and vultures then,
outside they wait and soar...

See, you don't see them
you are blind
pasting pictures on a crimson wall;

but love is gone
and crows will call...

Within shattered window's shards and splinter
you sit and stare
you're sitting there,

one hand on her picture...
one on self...

Hyenas howl and laugh and lie
waiting for their time...

(they know it won't be long)
and crows will call

Today you sag,
your skin is grey
her blood creeps down your chest,
her blindfold never hiding what would come

Now matted hair embrace blue lips
screams of terror interrupt,
forever you will sleep together now...

Leopards, cougars, carnivores,
sudden pause on paws of pacing,
They slowly rise to you:
the crows have called.

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Crows will Call

Contributed by SensitiveSoAbused on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 11:56:49 AM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

Sunny day,
or not, and grey.

the crows will call
the crows will call...

You sit inside
and vultures then,
outside they wait and soar...

See, you don't see them
you are blind
pasting pictures on a crimson wall;

but love is gone
and crows will call...

Within shattered window's shards and splinter
you sit and stare
you're sitting there,

one hand on her picture...
one on self...

Hyenas howl and laugh and lie
waiting for their time...

(they know it won't be long)
and crows will call

Today you sag,
your skin is grey
her blood creeps down your chest,
her blindfold never hiding what would come

Now matted hair embrace blue lips
screams of terror interrupt,
forever you will sleep together now...

Leopards, cougars, carnivores,
sudden pause on paws of pacing,
They slowly rise to you:
the crows have called.

Copyright © SensitiveSoAbused ... [ 2004-08-22 11:56:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Crows will Call (User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 12:49:49 PM AEST
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I personally can't make much sense fo this. None the less.... very well written.
I could vivedly see this.
MYSTERIOUS!!
The " CROWS WILL CALL".... kind of like.... evilness will come.
ANYWAYZ..... keep up the great imagination.
ALINA

Re: Crows will Call (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 12:28:44 AM AEST
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Interesting write this. Quite thought provoking.

Whisper

Re: Crows will Call (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 07:28:14 PM AEST
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dude this was A-*****in-mazing. I loved this...
it was so eerie and the alliteration really
added to the poem. I loved it all dang man...
you've blown me away.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Crows will Call (User Rating: 1 )
by skyblumoon on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 11:31:22 AM AEST
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Very eerie. Great write.
Blu

Re: Crows will Call (User Rating: 1 )
by Scarlett on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 04:27:58 AM AEST
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that was amazing - very atmospheric. loved it, it blew me away.

scarlett

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