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Array ( [sid] => 60989 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sadness [time] => 2004-08-22 08:28:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => you rain the tears on my cheeks
so cover me with misty veil
let no sunshine difuses
take, what you gave

red smudges of blood
covering robe of webs
and blue of my eyes
in grey dust was changed

Let me sleep in leaves
Autumn will appease my thirst
In spring i might find out

I don´t want to sleep

Let the snow cover me
His white might hide
The black shadow over me
And I return to life

Pršíš mi slzy na tváře,
Závojem mlžným mě zahal
Nechť nepronikne slunka záře
Vem si, cos mi dal

rudé skvrny ze srdce
překryjí z pavučin šat
a z očí modře
zbyl šedý prach

nechej mě usnout v listí
podzim ukonejší můj hlad
na jaře možná zjistím,
že nechci znovu spát

nechej na mě padnout sníh
jeho bělost snad
překryje můj černý stín
a já ožiju zas.

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Aika [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => czech [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Sadness

Contributed by Aika on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 08:28:53 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

you rain the tears on my cheeks
so cover me with misty veil
let no sunshine difuses
take, what you gave

red smudges of blood
covering robe of webs
and blue of my eyes
in grey dust was changed

Let me sleep in leaves
Autumn will appease my thirst
In spring i might find out

I don´t want to sleep

Let the snow cover me
His white might hide
The black shadow over me
And I return to life

Pršíš mi slzy na tváře,
Závojem mlžným mě zahal
Nechť nepronikne slunka záře
Vem si, cos mi dal

rudé skvrny ze srdce
překryjí z pavučin šat
a z očí modře
zbyl šedý prach

nechej mě usnout v listí
podzim ukonejší můj hlad
na jaře možná zjistím,
že nechci znovu spát

nechej na mě padnout sníh
jeho bělost snad
překryje můj černý stín
a já ožiju zas.

Copyright Â© Aika ... [ 2004-08-22 08:28:53]
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Re: Sadness (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 08:46:18 AM AEST
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what I could understand was quite deep and moving. Well expressded and full of sadness, your goal that you set out to say was accomplished this augustine day

Re: Sadness (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 11:31:11 AM AEST
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So sad aika, you are really retreating into yourself with this one.
I hope you return to the full glow of your sparkling life soon, a life that has touched and will touch so many

Steve

Re: Sadness (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 02:50:55 PM AEST
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Awwwwwwwwyes Dear Aika Baby.....I too love the snow........a white covering to cleanse every soul............also in the winter I feel so protected by its covering...perhaps because no one can reach me......or is it because I can't get out to reach others? Whatever it may be......I loved this poem so much......it's was so like you.......but then I could relate.....it was so like me too!
Lovely!
conniemom

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