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Array ( [sid] => 6098 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Damaged [time] => 2002-11-02 18:42:49 [hometext] => i've had older men try to take advantage of me because i was weak and quiet...and even your relatives can catch u..... always be clear and speak up!!!!!!!!!!!!
That's a mistake i have to live with..... [bodytext] => How do you look at me
When you come around
Use your hand
Don’t speak a sound
Am I the girl
You wanted to love
Or the bait
That conceives you blood?
Your selfish plagues
Are designed like the rest
Only wanting what is good
Rubbing tightly against my chest
I am your target
Because I look weak
I’ve always been quiet
You think I wont speak
Take advantage now
Been used as your prey
Damage has been done
In the worst thinkable way
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 223 [topic] => 13 [informant] => rockshv [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Damaged

Contributed by rockshv on Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 06:42:49 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

How do you look at me
When you come around
Use your hand
Don’t speak a sound
Am I the girl
You wanted to love
Or the bait
That conceives you blood?
Your selfish plagues
Are designed like the rest
Only wanting what is good
Rubbing tightly against my chest
I am your target
Because I look weak
I’ve always been quiet
You think I wont speak
Take advantage now
Been used as your prey
Damage has been done
In the worst thinkable way

Copyright Â© rockshv ... [ 2002-11-02 18:42:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Damaged (User Rating: 1 )
by Fwog on Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 09:31:36 PM AEST
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Oh God rockshv,
this is so painful> how dare anyone treat you like this.
It is when I read something like this that I start to question, Is there a God?
too many of the kids I work with on the street and in institutions are so damaged.
I am so sorry you have been so hurt.
I pray for retribution.
Warmest regards,
Fwog

Re: Damaged (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 06:05:19 AM AEST
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I understand,Ive had men that treated me like this & I learned long ago I'm not letting them walk all over me,You have to get tough!!!!Take care!
Christina

Re: Damaged (User Rating: 1 )
by orgygirl on Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 08:02:44 AM AEST
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Im very sorry for what happened but looking on the bright side a very good poem came from it.

Take care

R

Re: Damaged (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 06:09:02 AM AEST
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So painful to read...I can only imagine how hard it was to write..and to actually face... I'm so sorry for your hurt...and hope things are much brighter now..
Hugs
Jenni

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