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Array ( [sid] => 60970 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Foreign Beauty [time] => 2004-08-22 02:19:36 [hometext] => Beauty seen beyond the blemishes. [bodytext] => Misty cloaks spiral the sun beams,
Flower petals bear yesterdays rain,
Branches wave to welcome Morning,
One more day silently leaves again.

My breath filled with foreign air,
Yet familiarity grows upon my skin,
Each day the veil of pre-judged impressions,
Is taken over by appreciative tints.

The beauty of simplicity slowly evoked,
Glory of humanity painted with voices,
Rainbows peek behind dreary clouds,
A calm lies beyond ignorant noises.

Traditional land of ancestral wonder,
Lifts my head higher and higher above,
Though storms arrive with claps of thunder,
With gold shafts come assuring doves. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 222 [topic] => 19 [informant] => blueheart [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

Foreign Beauty

Contributed by blueheart on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 02:19:36 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Misty cloaks spiral the sun beams,
Flower petals bear yesterdays rain,
Branches wave to welcome Morning,
One more day silently leaves again.

My breath filled with foreign air,
Yet familiarity grows upon my skin,
Each day the veil of pre-judged impressions,
Is taken over by appreciative tints.

The beauty of simplicity slowly evoked,
Glory of humanity painted with voices,
Rainbows peek behind dreary clouds,
A calm lies beyond ignorant noises.

Traditional land of ancestral wonder,
Lifts my head higher and higher above,
Though storms arrive with claps of thunder,
With gold shafts come assuring doves.

Copyright © blueheart ... [ 2004-08-22 02:19:36]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Foreign Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 03:02:14 AM AEST
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Wow! sutle yet powerfull masterpeice.
Luv the last line With gold shafts come asuring doves. heavenly beautifull!
luv, huggs, many smiles,
emy

Re: Foreign Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 03:30:36 AM AEST
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What a beautiful, stunning description of nature...I have always loved your poetry and now I love it even more because in reading this, I notice your poetry has evolved a bit to a greater level. Kudos, and keep on writing.

~Ave

Re: Foreign Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 05:23:33 AM AEST
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Awww..Hanna..very nice description of nature..very beautiful..keep writing on.
venkat

Re: Foreign Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 02:13:34 PM AEST
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I am thrilled to see that the new environment is starting to grow on you. Enjoy this time of your life. It will be one you will remember forever.

Love,
Rita

Re: Foreign Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 10:38:54 AM AEST
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Beautiful!!

Re: Foreign Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 02:22:19 AM AEST
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Splendid poem that gives me a little view behind the veil...
Keep 'em coming!
Hugs,
Hur

Re: Foreign Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 05:19:17 AM AEST
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I commend you on the ability to see beyond....
and even more so to put it down on the page so masterfully!

Re: Foreign Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 02:01:04 PM AEST
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hanna this is brilliant, i dont know how i missed it! an exquisite poem, hugs n' love nessa

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