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Dad
Contributed by
rockshv
on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 05:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Where were you when I needed your hand?
Why did you leave me alone?
Was I supposed to understand?
Why you didn’t is still unknown
Where were you when I called your name?
Or when I needed a hug?
Was it me you had to blame?
Your false promises were like a drug
Where were you when mom wasn't around?
Didn’t you care where I was?
What would you do if you knew I drowned?
Your actions were too many flaws
Why didn’t you care when I found you?
How come you told me more lies?
Didn’t you tell me you wanted to?
Your excuse wasn’t worth a goodbye
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Re: Dad
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fwog on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 10:05:52 PM AEST (User
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Hello again rockshv,
Your pain is so frighteningly tangible.
But coming through I feel such a strength of spirit.
You certaily have been damaged but hopefully not broken.
Warmest regards,
Fwog |
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Re: Dad
(User Rating: 1 ) by rbp861 on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 11:37:21 PM AEST (User
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I know how you feel,grate write |
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Re: Dad
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 05:41:02 AM AEST (User
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Hi Rock, this is such a sad poem...but like Fwog says, your strength shows.... Keep up the good work... and stay strong!!!
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Re: Dad
(User Rating: 1 ) by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 04:13:05 AM AEST (User
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I know how it feels to have a father who it never there and constantly lies. Good Poem.
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Re: Dad
(User Rating: 1 ) by Twinky on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 04:32:04 AM AEST (User
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i feel this one i as well have a father who doesnt feel the need to be in his daughters life and i have a lot of anger towards him but i seem to take it out on myself instead of him keep up the good work! |
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Re: Dad
(User Rating: 1 ) by yellow_sundragon on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 07:58:18 PM AEST (User
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Ouch. I don't know what you went through, because every situation is different. But mine was similar, except it was my mother. I'm glad that you got through it, and it's a lovely poem that you wrote because of it.
YS |
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