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Array ( [sid] => 60958 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Crimson Rain Drops [time] => 2004-08-21 23:51:18 [hometext] => Its yet another sick and twisted poem...and once again you have been warned....ENJOY!! [bodytext] => Crimson rain drops fall around you
Puddles of scarlet form at your feet
Smear the drops all over your face
In your mouth they taste so sweet

Dancing around in the puddles of blood
Screaming and laughing your not insane
Your just enjoying this cold dark evening
Splashing around in the crimson rain

Call out to all of those who are listening
Tell them that it’s time to play
All over the city they come to join you
Let’s go now it’s time to slay

You ravage through the quiet city
No survivors in this twisted game
Don’t you dare leave anyone breathing
Or you’ll just become a shame

Demons of the night come together
No one left the game now stops
Your demons have all left you now
All that are left are the crimson rain drops
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Crimson Rain Drops

Contributed by CrimsonTears on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 11:51:18 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Crimson rain drops fall around you
Puddles of scarlet form at your feet
Smear the drops all over your face
In your mouth they taste so sweet

Dancing around in the puddles of blood
Screaming and laughing your not insane
Your just enjoying this cold dark evening
Splashing around in the crimson rain

Call out to all of those who are listening
Tell them that it’s time to play
All over the city they come to join you
Let’s go now it’s time to slay

You ravage through the quiet city
No survivors in this twisted game
Don’t you dare leave anyone breathing
Or you’ll just become a shame

Demons of the night come together
No one left the game now stops
Your demons have all left you now
All that are left are the crimson rain drops




Copyright © CrimsonTears ... [ 2004-08-21 23:51:18]
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Re: Crimson Rain Drops (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 11:56:36 PM AEST
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I love this! You are such an awesome writer, it's very different and unique, I love it!
Katie


Re: Crimson Rain Drops (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 12:41:33 AM AEST
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you make a person hungry for the taste......thirsty.......this rocks!!!!


Re: Crimson Rain Drops (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 02:15:52 AM AEST
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YEAH! THis is what i like to see


Re: Crimson Rain Drops (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 05:31:54 AM AEST
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GREAT WRITE!! i love your unique style

dizza


Re: Crimson Rain Drops (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 07:00:03 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this immensely. I liked the second
stanza the best, "no survivors in this twisted
game" I like how you refered to killing as
game it upped the twistedness of it a notch. I
also liked how it was actually raining blood
since so many people were massacred. A
wonderful write.

Bobo (Joel)




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