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°°°Satan's Ring°°°
Contributed by
OreO
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Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 04:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I sit alone behind my dark mask
I try to make people smile and laugh
They always ask where i get my strength
I laugh and say from satan's ring
Some say yea right and move on to play
Ignoring the words i have to say
I sit and watch them laugh so hard
While i cry my tears of a broken heart
Friends they usually will always be nice
But when problems arise they scatter like mice
If your life is good and your doing alright
They'll stand right there, right by your side
How many times have you felt this pain
And knew exactly who was to blame
Does the mask you wear fall off at times
In hopes they'll see just one small line
Have you ever felt like nobody cares
And sat numb and alone just to stare
Have you hurt yourself inside and out
To escape the pain of your suicidal route
When you sit that numb all cut and bruised
Where are your friends your starting to lose
You try to see if they hear you somehow
But they turn their backs and leave you now
Be wise with your words you speak to your friends
If they live or die, it just all depends
Life is to short to say hurtful words
Instead say i love you and let go the hurt
Let the sun not go down on angry words said
You'd be real sorry if they end up dead
Take the time to make up and say the right things
Or you'll end up like me with no friends..
- In Satan's Ring -
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OreO
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2002-11-02 16:45:00]
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Re: °°°Satan's Ring°°°
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 04:51:52 PM AEST
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Sad write, OreO.... great message also... love this...
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Re: °°°Satan's Ring°°°
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by Poetic_Angel on
Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 02:45:12 AM AEST
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| your write is very meaningful and inspiring. it is true that people actually have few friends. keep up the good work |
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Re: °°°Satan's Ring°°°
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 06:07:59 AM AEST
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| Very nicely done! Friends are hard to find! Christina |
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Re: °°°Satan's Ring°°°
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 10:46:33 PM AEST
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OreO,
So true... true friends are very hard to find... great poem w/ a nice message!!
~Dani |
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Re: °°°Satan's Ring°°°
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 01:58:44 AM AEST
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| A true friend doesn't stand behind you during bad times.....they stand in front of you. Friends of this kind are so rare. Treat them as a priceless treasure. I feel your pain through your words. Great write! Larry |
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Re: °°°Satan's Ring°°°
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by Suzy on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 08:37:44 AM AEST
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Kind of reminded me of that a good friend is someone you can call at 2 a.m. to get you out of jail, but a best friend would be right there with you saying " what a rush ".....great write as are all of yours I've read thus far.....thanks for all the comments on my work...
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Re: °°°Satan's Ring°°°
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by darkeyedman on
Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 11:33:09 PM AEST
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| another really good poem. good job. jim |
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