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Array ( [sid] => 60933 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My first and last drink of you [time] => 2004-08-21 17:32:41 [hometext] => Dudes! tell me it sucks, tell me you hate it, just tell me sumthin! [bodytext] => At one point I drank you
I drank you in everyday
I needed and I loved you
So why didn't you stay?
You got it in you head
Inside you left me dead
You knew the consequince
I had no evidence
But it was your concience
That gave you away

So this 1's crap to...huh
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My first and last drink of you

Contributed by sid_the_tampon_fairy on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 05:32:41 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

At one point I drank you
I drank you in everyday
I needed and I loved you
So why didn't you stay?
You got it in you head
Inside you left me dead
You knew the consequince
I had no evidence
But it was your concience
That gave you away

So this 1's crap to...huh

Copyright © sid_the_tampon_fairy ... [ 2004-08-21 17:32:41]
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Re: My first and last drink of you (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 05:36:13 PM AEST
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Not crap as far as I can read... It makes a lot of sense to me.......
Jenni

Re: My first and last drink of you (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 06:40:44 PM AEST
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this touches pretty close to home. I liked it much.

Re: My first and last drink of you (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 06:55:34 PM AEST
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very good... I like. :)

Re: My first and last drink of you (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 12:00:36 AM AEST
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good poetry! love your user name as well.

wildejohnny.

Re: My first and last drink of you (User Rating: 1 )
by FiggySue on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 03:01:01 AM AEST
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I love it. I felt it, Great job.

Re: My first and last drink of you (User Rating: 1 )
by Sirena_Degana on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 05:17:25 PM AEST
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Jess.. i wish you'd stop putting your poems down...it's a talent i know you can do these...and this one i can relate to with you know who.....so stop it this one is crazy wicked awesome....so very "buttery" for a poem..now you know that's a compliment

love ya
blessed be
sirena

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