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Array ( [sid] => 60925 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Confused [time] => 2004-08-21 15:32:10 [hometext] => wanting the person i used to be back...confused by how i lost who i was... [bodytext] => Hand me my heart back
Let me live again
See this world as I saw it before
Not as I see it now
My ways have changed
I’m not the same
I am half alone
Unknown to what I want
I’m so confused
My mind is shot
What has happened to who I am
To who I was not long ago
I have forgotten
I have lost myself in this world I’m in
Can I go back
Can I be who I was before
Can I live once more
As who I really am?
Or will I be stuck
Confused about who I am
Confused about what happened
Who I became and why? [comments] => 4 [counter] => 226 [topic] => 44 [informant] => pyrofungus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Nostalgic )

Confused

Contributed by pyrofungus on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 03:32:10 PM in AEST
Topic: Nostalgic

Hand me my heart back
Let me live again
See this world as I saw it before
Not as I see it now
My ways have changed
I’m not the same
I am half alone
Unknown to what I want
I’m so confused
My mind is shot
What has happened to who I am
To who I was not long ago
I have forgotten
I have lost myself in this world I’m in
Can I go back
Can I be who I was before
Can I live once more
As who I really am?
Or will I be stuck
Confused about who I am
Confused about what happened
Who I became and why?

Copyright Â© pyrofungus ... [ 2004-08-21 15:32:10]
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Re: Confused (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 04:39:05 PM AEST
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i totally was going through that same kind of thing for a while, and i guess i still am though it isn't as foremost in my mind. i lost who i used to be too, all that childhood innocence. but you did a really good job on that poem cause i could relate to it a lot. but i gues the things we've learned becoming who we now are, are invaluable, at least to me they are. and i wouldn't give those up to get back who i used to be.

sorry i blabbered. good write.

~Jekyll

Re: Confused (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 01:35:06 AM AEST
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I like this, some of the lines are very emotional. I suggest you start using stanzas, they give the poem substance. You have talent. Keep it up.

Peace and Kumquats With Love
-E. Raven

Re: Confused (User Rating: 1 )
by tears_of_blood on Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 01:44:10 PM AEST
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thats was i good write man iam in the same boat iam chaging my was and trying to get every thing i had back keep you poems coming

brad

Re: Confused (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:48:31 PM AEST
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Things can change us, or we think we've changed. We grow..we learn. Is that change? A flower grows but it's the same flower...

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