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Array ( [sid] => 60922 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => False Hope [time] => 2004-08-21 14:50:31 [hometext] => my world seems upside down from the loss of my father, mother and brother, all within 7 months someday happiness will bloom [bodytext] => can i hide within your sheltering arms
will they make the world go away for me
even for a little while to soothe my soul
will they heal this injured soul i possess
give me my false hope just for one moment

do i sound like i have lost my only hope
is there hope of redemption for a lost soul
can you give me some hope at all
am i begging for some repreive any repreive
give me my false hope just for one moment

the world feels like it has caved in on me
i dont know if im up or down anymore am i
is there any hope within this world do i dare
can i expect some healing down the road
give me my false hope just for one moment

i tremble at the thought of this loniness
this solitude this emptiness this void
i dont feel i have any more hope left to me
yet it is said time does heal all wounds
give me my false hope just for one moment
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 257 [topic] => 39 [informant] => maryetta [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
False Hope

Contributed by maryetta on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 02:50:31 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief



can i hide within your sheltering arms
will they make the world go away for me
even for a little while to soothe my soul
will they heal this injured soul i possess
give me my false hope just for one moment

do i sound like i have lost my only hope
is there hope of redemption for a lost soul
can you give me some hope at all
am i begging for some repreive any repreive
give me my false hope just for one moment

the world feels like it has caved in on me
i dont know if im up or down anymore am i
is there any hope within this world do i dare
can i expect some healing down the road
give me my false hope just for one moment

i tremble at the thought of this loniness
this solitude this emptiness this void
i dont feel i have any more hope left to me
yet it is said time does heal all wounds
give me my false hope just for one moment




Copyright © maryetta ... [ 2004-08-21 14:50:31]
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Re: False Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 03:12:49 PM AEST
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powerful and emotional write. purely amazing. im sorry for your loss, the loss of loved ones are always hard to endure. you always have their memories, and they will always live on within you.


Re: False Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by CaddishCut on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 03:31:28 PM AEST
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First off I am terribly sorry to hear about your losses. That's heart wrenching! *big huggles*

Second of all, the rhyme scheme is really unique. I like it alot!


Re: False Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by Zaf_Stud on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 04:59:40 PM AEST
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May God comfort your grief! Your poem is good enough to make people be grateful to have their parents & siblings. Bless u. Zaf_Stud




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