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Array ( [sid] => 60875 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => YOU CAN SEPARATE [time] => 2004-08-21 02:58:14 [hometext] => This is the second page of my book 2 my grandson Tyler in Brunswick Georgia USA [bodytext] =>















SultryRose's Signatures






Before U were even born
Mom talking 2 mamaw on phone
in the middle of Brunswick, Ga USA
Everytime Mammaw would say.

Put the phone on tummy so mamaw can talk.
U knew it was your other mamaw.
This mark is written in your soul
This mamaw's voice you'll know.

You can separate physical ties
Can jus see traffics eyes
Your momma standing there phone to tummy
Couldn't separate this Grand mommy.

Saw U in nursey 1st after born
Such a tiny little man, not strong.
premature fingers-n-all,so cool
U quit crying when momaw's voice touched u.

Mummy stopped breathing before and after your birth.
Oh but for u she never left Earth!
She couldn't die leave you here
Her first child she longed for years
Many times she-n-I touch heaven with tears.

Abuse from others spilt u apart
but Mummy and all luv u within your heart.
Mamaw's gonna seek justice!
They'll never keep u from us!

Someday you will remember truth
as I'm keeping records for you.
One day we shall touch again
'Cause Jesus is mamaw's-n-Mummys
best friend!

Mommy has your bother Dylan but luvs u too.
Know this no matter what they do!
God is luv to one-n-all, so true
but I forgive them for what they do.

God sustains us each day
but we'd never ever turn u away!
Their lies were covered on the cross
but it's time for them to remember
King Jesus is boss!


In Jesus name, Amen!
Your mamaw eternal!
8/21/04
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YOU CAN SEPARATE

Contributed by emystar on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 02:58:14 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



















SultryRose's Signatures






Before U were even born
Mom talking 2 mamaw on phone
in the middle of Brunswick, Ga USA
Everytime Mammaw would say.

Put the phone on tummy so mamaw can talk.
U knew it was your other mamaw.
This mark is written in your soul
This mamaw's voice you'll know.

You can separate physical ties
Can jus see traffics eyes
Your momma standing there phone to tummy
Couldn't separate this Grand mommy.

Saw U in nursey 1st after born
Such a tiny little man, not strong.
premature fingers-n-all,so cool
U quit crying when momaw's voice touched u.

Mummy stopped breathing before and after your birth.
Oh but for u she never left Earth!
She couldn't die leave you here
Her first child she longed for years
Many times she-n-I touch heaven with tears.

Abuse from others spilt u apart
but Mummy and all luv u within your heart.
Mamaw's gonna seek justice!
They'll never keep u from us!

Someday you will remember truth
as I'm keeping records for you.
One day we shall touch again
'Cause Jesus is mamaw's-n-Mummys
best friend!

Mommy has your bother Dylan but luvs u too.
Know this no matter what they do!
God is luv to one-n-all, so true
but I forgive them for what they do.

God sustains us each day
but we'd never ever turn u away!
Their lies were covered on the cross
but it's time for them to remember
King Jesus is boss!


In Jesus name, Amen!
Your mamaw eternal!
8/21/04




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Re: YOU CAN SEPARATE (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 03:16:33 AM AEST
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Emy what a tragic but happy little story, I am pleased that you placed it on line for me to comment. Hugs from bernard.


Re: YOU CAN SEPARATE (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 04:13:17 AM AEST
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wonderful write..wonderful concluding lines..
beautifully rhymed.. venkat


Re: YOU CAN SEPARATE (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 06:47:02 AM AEST
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Emma that was so very sad with a happy ending which made me smile as I wiped away a tear

Beautiful


love sweetangelukxxxxxxx


Re: YOU CAN SEPARATE (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 02:17:16 PM AEST
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(((((emy)))))) Oh grrlfriend...this is so touching... it made me cry.... He is gonna treasure this forever....
Hugs
Jenni


Re: YOU CAN SEPARATE (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 05:03:48 AM AEST
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This is a very good poem. This makes me think about my mom


Re: YOU CAN SEPARATE (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 01:33:41 AM AEST
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very deep




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