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Array ( [sid] => 60771 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => im always here for u [time] => 2004-08-20 01:27:01 [hometext] => [bodytext] => u think that ur alone
and no one knows how u feel
but im right by ur side
though i may just be a ghost to u
a cold drift past ur shoulder
as u start to cry
theres nothing i can do
to make anything change
i see u change
sometimes for the worse
depression sinks over u
like the darkness of death
creeping over ur mind
but slowly i was no longer
just a drifting spirit to u
but a person who listens
a perso who cares
a person to help u smile
ur life began to change again
and u changed with it
making everyday worth while
u now light up a room
instead of bringing it to tears
even when u dont mean to
ur the crazy person
that i care so much about
that i would do anything for
that i love like my blood
and im always right by ur side
no matter what happens
and even if u dont want my help
im always right by ur side
no matter what happens
and even if u dont want my help
im always there to offer it
i never wanna be a ghost to u again
i never wanna coldy drift by u again [comments] => 1 [counter] => 317 [topic] => 16 [informant] => kes-kes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

im always here for u

Contributed by kes-kes on Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 01:27:01 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

u think that ur alone
and no one knows how u feel
but im right by ur side
though i may just be a ghost to u
a cold drift past ur shoulder
as u start to cry
theres nothing i can do
to make anything change
i see u change
sometimes for the worse
depression sinks over u
like the darkness of death
creeping over ur mind
but slowly i was no longer
just a drifting spirit to u
but a person who listens
a perso who cares
a person to help u smile
ur life began to change again
and u changed with it
making everyday worth while
u now light up a room
instead of bringing it to tears
even when u dont mean to
ur the crazy person
that i care so much about
that i would do anything for
that i love like my blood
and im always right by ur side
no matter what happens
and even if u dont want my help
im always right by ur side
no matter what happens
and even if u dont want my help
im always there to offer it
i never wanna be a ghost to u again
i never wanna coldy drift by u again

Copyright © kes-kes ... [ 2004-08-20 01:27:01]
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Re: im always here for u (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 01:40:50 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, kes kes! Thanks for sharing this - it is obviously written for someone that is very special to you. I do hope they know how much you care... it would be a shame if they didn't.

I do have one teeny suggestion... i found "u" and "ur" kind of distracting... if they were instead "you" and "your", I think it would make it easier to focus on what you're trying to convey rather than the actual words.

Again - Welcome! - it's nice to have you with us,
SNM

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