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Array ( [sid] => 60741 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Danger: Deep Water [time] => 2004-08-19 20:52:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Do not go beyond this point!
There is an undertow.

Black frogmen leap
from lily-pad rafts,
a helicopter darts
and hovers, like a giant
dragonfly dancing
over the marsh.

Men with long poles stir
the shallows, churn
the mud, cast hooked
lines, grapple the depths.

Bodies are pulled
from the water.

A mother and child bundled,
bagged, and put on ice.
Carted away in an ambulance.

The river flows on; swift
currents carry us away,
to home, to work, to play.

There is an undertow.
Do not go beyond this point! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 43 [informant] => pvd [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Danger: Deep Water

Contributed by pvd on Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 08:52:30 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Do not go beyond this point!
There is an undertow.

Black frogmen leap
from lily-pad rafts,
a helicopter darts
and hovers, like a giant
dragonfly dancing
over the marsh.

Men with long poles stir
the shallows, churn
the mud, cast hooked
lines, grapple the depths.

Bodies are pulled
from the water.

A mother and child bundled,
bagged, and put on ice.
Carted away in an ambulance.

The river flows on; swift
currents carry us away,
to home, to work, to play.

There is an undertow.
Do not go beyond this point!

Copyright © pvd ... [ 2004-08-19 20:52:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Danger: Deep Water (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 05:09:47 AM AEST
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I like this and understand the meaning all too well. I remember once watching a neighbour swimming beside rocks in an undertow. Then I heard the 'dragonflies' and saw a lifeboat.

Sadly, he'd drowned before they could save him . . .
Resonative and thoughtful. Thanks for writing.

Re: Danger: Deep Water (User Rating: 1 )
by Millennium on Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 09:54:03 PM AEST
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oh wow.
thats really cool...almost spooky

almost very spooky.

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