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Array ( [sid] => 60732 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Out to You [time] => 2004-08-19 19:33:37 [hometext] => For a hurting, friend who doesn't open up very easily, but I love him just the same. 8-19-04 [bodytext] => A wounded soul
A crying heart
You're sick inside
All torn apart.

Silent, though
Your sorrow be
You're hiding, running
Fearfully.

You need a friend
To mirror your pain
So that your hurt
Is not in vain.

I'll cry with you
I'll hurt with you
Be crushed, be mad
Be strong for you.

Open up
Please, start to cope
You need a friend
You need to hope.

You love the Lord
As He loves you
Learn from this pain
He's given you.

Here is my love
My sympathy too.
You have my heart---
For it goes out to you. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 16 [informant] => eatfresh22 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Out to You

Contributed by eatfresh22 on Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 07:33:37 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

A wounded soul
A crying heart
You're sick inside
All torn apart.

Silent, though
Your sorrow be
You're hiding, running
Fearfully.

You need a friend
To mirror your pain
So that your hurt
Is not in vain.

I'll cry with you
I'll hurt with you
Be crushed, be mad
Be strong for you.

Open up
Please, start to cope
You need a friend
You need to hope.

You love the Lord
As He loves you
Learn from this pain
He's given you.

Here is my love
My sympathy too.
You have my heart---
For it goes out to you.

Copyright Â© eatfresh22 ... [ 2004-08-19 19:33:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Out to You (User Rating: 1 )
by ps_ihateyou on Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 09:43:46 PM AEST
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i really liked this. very well written..and i can relate to it...

Re: Out to You (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 08:06:38 PM AEST
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Not only is this poem beautifully structured with wonderful rhythm, the writer proves to be a very good friend. Aren't we all glad to have Carrie in our lives?
Love you, girl.

Lots of love and peace be with you,

Chelsea

Re: Out to You (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 06:52:27 PM AEST
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Very moving. I hope he gets the message with this.

And yes Chelsea, Carrie is a blessing to know.

Slàn
Andrew

Re: Out to You (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 09:51:18 PM AEST
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Dude! I love her! YEs Carrie, we all do.... I really like this one, especially...
I'll cry with you
I'll hurt with you
Be crushed, be mad
Be strong for you.
It's pretty... like you! Ok, enough of that cheesy stuff. Happy, Em?
Well, take care, Carrie.
David

P.S. Sorry... seems like I wrote more to other people on this than I did to you.

Re: Out to You (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 01:19:47 PM AEST
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Great poem Carriebearie... it is very much a Davidic writing (not King David, but David Lossing) I think he is influencing you in that area. Just don't lapse into his love poem patterns... *gag*

Em

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