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Array ( [sid] => 60695 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dreams [time] => 2004-08-19 12:16:01 [hometext] => This one is pretty recent... it's different from my other works but I like it. [bodytext] => Wonder when the sky began falling,
Or when the pigs grew wings.
All the things that mattered,
Crept past me while I was lying.
I need to clear my mind,
And discard of all distractions,
If I’m planning to catch up with my dreams.
Always thought love was just around the corner,
Playing games like hide and go seek,
Turns out it’s learn and don’t repeat.
Maybe there were reasonable choices,
Love’s a tricky subject, confusing me all too much.
Times is on my side
And it’s okay if I’m not constantly in control of my future
I might try to loosen up and let love take the lead.
Sounds way too easy, to be honest.
For I tend to complicate things.
But who knows??
Maybe people really can change.
I don’t want everything to evolve into dishonestly and misleads.
So I’m learning to take love by the hand
And way what I mean, be unafraid and believe.
You see, everything has a meaning,
I just can’t let my mind over analyze how I feel
Life is too important to live without love
Might as well be happy while there’s a chance
Sometimes I forget there’s a tomorrow,
And that I can only control so much on my own.
Wouldn’t it be nice to share your deepest thoughts,
With someone you truly love?
If only I would believe.
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Dreams

Contributed by Fairy on Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 12:16:01 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Wonder when the sky began falling,
Or when the pigs grew wings.
All the things that mattered,
Crept past me while I was lying.
I need to clear my mind,
And discard of all distractions,
If I’m planning to catch up with my dreams.
Always thought love was just around the corner,
Playing games like hide and go seek,
Turns out it’s learn and don’t repeat.
Maybe there were reasonable choices,
Love’s a tricky subject, confusing me all too much.
Times is on my side
And it’s okay if I’m not constantly in control of my future
I might try to loosen up and let love take the lead.
Sounds way too easy, to be honest.
For I tend to complicate things.
But who knows??
Maybe people really can change.
I don’t want everything to evolve into dishonestly and misleads.
So I’m learning to take love by the hand
And way what I mean, be unafraid and believe.
You see, everything has a meaning,
I just can’t let my mind over analyze how I feel
Life is too important to live without love
Might as well be happy while there’s a chance
Sometimes I forget there’s a tomorrow,
And that I can only control so much on my own.
Wouldn’t it be nice to share your deepest thoughts,
With someone you truly love?
If only I would believe.




Copyright © Fairy ... [ 2004-08-19 12:16:01]
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Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Dierna on Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 12:19:48 PM AEST
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Very nice and heartfelt.....I feel that way sometimes myself.....I love it.


Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 01:15:19 PM AEST
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A very nice and heartfelt writing that evokes perhaps what most people see as the hope of gratification in the face of possible suffering...

Nice poem and quaint idea...but

people never change

if it hurts it hurts....regardless of what comes next...if you think that the happiness one attains in the beginning is worth the fall int the chasm afterwards...then go ahead be unwary...otherwise...be wise...oh well...




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