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Array ( [sid] => 60619 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => such an evil consentrate [time] => 2004-08-18 19:33:23 [hometext] => oh i'm a bad bad person.. no excuse shall cross my fingers or lips this time. truth be told i'm just evil [bodytext] => oh i'm gonna turn into barbie
plastic and fake
i'll make myself flawless
and cover my scars
turn into an empty shell
harbor your reflection

'cause if they can't see me
their judgements can't hurt

i'll pretend to love you
because he won't except me
as my real secrets come to my surface
i'll surpress them again

i'm not good enough for him

i'm gonna use you, boy
deep inside you know
deep inside you couldn't care less
they'll ask me why i'm settling for less than imperfection
i'll say i love you
pretend to be mad at them again

i'll never let me win [comments] => 3 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 13 [informant] => innerbeautyqueen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

such an evil consentrate

Contributed by innerbeautyqueen on Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 07:33:23 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

oh i'm gonna turn into barbie
plastic and fake
i'll make myself flawless
and cover my scars
turn into an empty shell
harbor your reflection

'cause if they can't see me
their judgements can't hurt

i'll pretend to love you
because he won't except me
as my real secrets come to my surface
i'll surpress them again

i'm not good enough for him

i'm gonna use you, boy
deep inside you know
deep inside you couldn't care less
they'll ask me why i'm settling for less than imperfection
i'll say i love you
pretend to be mad at them again

i'll never let me win

Copyright © innerbeautyqueen ... [ 2004-08-18 19:33:23]
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Re: such an evil consentrate (User Rating: 1 )
by neveryours on Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 07:45:43 PM AEST
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love your attitude - use and abuse - surpression and aggression. Lots of feeling here.

Re: such an evil consentrate (User Rating: 1 )
by dragonlover on Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 08:23:09 PM AEST
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very interesting!

Re: such an evil consentrate (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 03:06:01 PM AEST
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The path of inner pain. I like the description and the fact that you feel comfortable expressing these kinds of thoughts.

Keep writing.

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