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Array ( [sid] => 60615 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm Sorry [time] => 2004-08-18 19:09:16 [hometext] => Please Comment....Thanx!! [bodytext] => Take my life
I’m ready to let go
I’m not afraid anymore
Death is all I want to know

I hate my life
I screwed up real bad
Now nothing matters
I’m just way too sad

I’ll just slit my wrists
And watch myself die
Watch the crimson fall
Losing tears, as I cry

As I’m slowly dying
I feel the pain slipping away
I just feel so free
What more is there to say

I know I have failed you
So this is how I’ll right my wrong
I’ll let you stop worrying
So now you can be strong

I just want you to know that I love you
And I’m sorry for being me
I’ve made too many mistakes
I’m sorry I’m not who you want me to be
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 36 [informant] => CrimsonTears [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

I'm Sorry

Contributed by CrimsonTears on Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 07:09:16 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Take my life
I’m ready to let go
I’m not afraid anymore
Death is all I want to know

I hate my life
I screwed up real bad
Now nothing matters
I’m just way too sad

I’ll just slit my wrists
And watch myself die
Watch the crimson fall
Losing tears, as I cry

As I’m slowly dying
I feel the pain slipping away
I just feel so free
What more is there to say

I know I have failed you
So this is how I’ll right my wrong
I’ll let you stop worrying
So now you can be strong

I just want you to know that I love you
And I’m sorry for being me
I’ve made too many mistakes
I’m sorry I’m not who you want me to be

Copyright Â© CrimsonTears ... [ 2004-08-18 19:09:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I'm Sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 07:13:31 PM AEST
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Good job,,but my advice is give up on the ***** ppl throw at ya...

Re: I'm Sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 09:06:06 PM AEST
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pretty good bro!
everyone screws up...and its hard to forget, or get over...it takes time...the mistakes yea we all got those too...i know how you feel man...i can totaly relate...

please comment on my work too
Summer

Re: I'm Sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by Stoney1 on Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 10:09:11 AM AEST
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Get thee to a psychiatrist!

...And I’m sorry for being me
I’ve made too many mistakes
I’m sorry I’m not who you want me to be

With self esteem that low, you need professional help.

Take my life
I’m ready to let go
I’m not afraid anymore
Death is all I want to know

I hate my life
I screwed up real bad
Now nothing matters
I’m just way too sad

What did you do to warrant offing yourself?

Tell me you didn't forget to put down the toilet
seat after using the facility? Say it isn't so!

They can be very unforgiving about that one.

I know... you made yourself a sandwich and didn't put
all of the fixin's away just in case you wanted another
one. She discovered this cardinal sin and now you're
ready to walk the long mile.

Or is it the garbage thing? Did you forget to take out the
garbage again? My old boot's pretty good in the winter
if I forget, but she can really get excited if I forget in the
summertime; she's afraid of picking up a bag and touching
any of God's little creatures, i.e. maggots! heh, heh.

Couldn't help pullin' yer ***** after reading one too many
of these, "I'm going to punch my own ticket" poems. *s*

Stoney

Re: I'm Sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by willow_tara72002 on Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 08:13:06 PM AEST
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I can completly relate to this. Cause thats how i am feeling alot latley, a dissapointment to ppl because im me, and that nothing will help me be happy,.. great write.

-Amber

Re: I'm Sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by allymp on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 05:13:57 PM AEST
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i understand you're having a hard time....but dont take your life away or wish to die...life is just to precious...
keep faith

Re: I'm Sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 11:38:39 AM AEST
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love yourself
you are you
be proud
you are a beaut poet

cheers!~

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