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Array ( [sid] => 60593 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The results of sinful desire... [time] => 2004-08-18 15:18:51 [hometext] => Desire overtook me, and made me do something I regretted afterwards, fearing the end of a good friendship... [bodytext] => This feeling inside of me,
Oh, how it burns deliciously!
When you speak my name,
This heart of mine goes wild!
Your flesh caresses mine,
And I melt…
I am a volcano of desire and lust,
Ready at any moment to rupture…
Your soft, rose-lips brush against mine,
And blissfully, I die…
We spoke words of passion and aspiration,
Floating in a sea of lust…
Somewhere inside of us,
Knowing that this is a sin…
Knowing that you are taken…
I’ve wanted this for so long,
You with me,
You sharing the same feelings towards me…
I have you now,
And yet,
I feel as though my heart is being ripped apart…
I ask myself,
"Isn’t this what you longed for?"
A part of me says ‘yes’,
But the other part shrieks,
"He’s taken! This isn’t right!"
Tears of remorse stream down my face,
And I tremble vigorously of the feelings inside…
Shame, regret, fear, and disgust towards myself…
I look in the mirror,
And I see a wretched girl,
A whore to the night and all that is evil…
I pleaded to God for forgiveness and guidance,
Through the dark corridors of Temptation…
Fearfully, I expressed my feelings to him,
Petrified that we may lose our friendship in me doing this…
And I felt drained and pathetic afterwards…
I could see the impact on him through his eyes,
Those beautiful, heavenly eyes….
Tears fell, and as I drowned in them,
He looked to me and said,
"I’m so sorry…"
And God looked upon our heavy souls that day,
And He forgave and He guided…
Not to temptation, but to a land of long-lasting friendship and clarity… [comments] => 7 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 43 [informant] => FleurdeSang [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
The results of sinful desire...

Contributed by FleurdeSang on Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 03:18:51 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



This feeling inside of me,
Oh, how it burns deliciously!
When you speak my name,
This heart of mine goes wild!
Your flesh caresses mine,
And I melt…
I am a volcano of desire and lust,
Ready at any moment to rupture…
Your soft, rose-lips brush against mine,
And blissfully, I die…
We spoke words of passion and aspiration,
Floating in a sea of lust…
Somewhere inside of us,
Knowing that this is a sin…
Knowing that you are taken…
I’ve wanted this for so long,
You with me,
You sharing the same feelings towards me…
I have you now,
And yet,
I feel as though my heart is being ripped apart…
I ask myself,
"Isn’t this what you longed for?"
A part of me says ‘yes’,
But the other part shrieks,
"He’s taken! This isn’t right!"
Tears of remorse stream down my face,
And I tremble vigorously of the feelings inside…
Shame, regret, fear, and disgust towards myself…
I look in the mirror,
And I see a wretched girl,
A whore to the night and all that is evil…
I pleaded to God for forgiveness and guidance,
Through the dark corridors of Temptation…
Fearfully, I expressed my feelings to him,
Petrified that we may lose our friendship in me doing this…
And I felt drained and pathetic afterwards…
I could see the impact on him through his eyes,
Those beautiful, heavenly eyes….
Tears fell, and as I drowned in them,
He looked to me and said,
"I’m so sorry…"
And God looked upon our heavy souls that day,
And He forgave and He guided…
Not to temptation, but to a land of long-lasting friendship and clarity…




Copyright © FleurdeSang ... [ 2004-08-18 15:18:51]
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Re: The results of sinful desire... (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 03:25:18 PM AEST
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I know I can relate. This one definately stuck a cord. In my case the friendship also remains. The cost of that friendship though ... Only the forgiveness God can grant will provide me absolution.
Very well written.


Re: The results of sinful desire... (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 03:32:22 PM AEST
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What a powerful passionate poem

I can relate to your words although many years ago now.
My feelings were the same then

Simply magnificent i loved how you wrote this


Love Sweetangelukxxxx


Re: The results of sinful desire... (User Rating: 1 )
by Chade on Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 03:53:42 PM AEST
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a pashionate write that creates vivid images in my mind. Friendship can always last if the efort is put into it, even if sumthing that shouldnt happen happens.

Chade


Re: The results of sinful desire... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 04:10:16 PM AEST
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Great story flow! It wraps you up and carries you right through to the end.
The passion and pain are quite evident in this well written verse.


Re: The results of sinful desire... (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 06:13:26 PM AEST
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This must have been hard to write. It is always hard to face our mistakes.


Re: The results of sinful desire... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 09:36:18 AM AEST
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I made this same mistake, and am STILL paying the repurcussions of it. This touched me like you don't know!Great job!
Angel always...joni


Re: The results of sinful desire... (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 11:27:19 AM AEST
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Well, I won't attempt to be judge or jury on your actions as to know the reasons we do the things we do people have to know the real person.
I will be judge on your work though.........and to this I say well done

steve




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