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Array ( [sid] => 6048 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Day Thirteen [time] => 2002-11-01 13:45:00 [hometext] => day thirteen...count the lines [bodytext] => the darkened sky, black crows will see this night
all life cease to watch, scribes shall take note of this
feelings of incipient mortality sweep over us
our unassailable brotherhood has taken seige
mortal enemy strikes with the wrath or whole pantheons or gods
and no man, no defense, shall lessen their charge
we have condemned ourself to this suffering
the end of the world, some might call it tonight
our beloved nation has fallen and though it rends my heart apart
i will not mar my nobility in such a servitude
the scribes wont mention mine existence, although i fought
the watchers won't recall me, although i fought
so this is to show i have fought but fight no longer
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 13 [informant] => crucifixioncross [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Day Thirteen

Contributed by crucifixioncross on Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 01:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

the darkened sky, black crows will see this night
all life cease to watch, scribes shall take note of this
feelings of incipient mortality sweep over us
our unassailable brotherhood has taken seige
mortal enemy strikes with the wrath or whole pantheons or gods
and no man, no defense, shall lessen their charge
we have condemned ourself to this suffering
the end of the world, some might call it tonight
our beloved nation has fallen and though it rends my heart apart
i will not mar my nobility in such a servitude
the scribes wont mention mine existence, although i fought
the watchers won't recall me, although i fought
so this is to show i have fought but fight no longer

Copyright © crucifixioncross ... [ 2002-11-01 13:45:00]
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Re: Day Thirteen (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 11:30:06 PM AEST
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Very clever! I liked this! Christina

Re: Day Thirteen (User Rating: 1 )
by lost_word on Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 03:11:07 PM AEST
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very good write, deep an to the point.
thanx for the comment post, i tried but didnt get much. lost_word

Re: Day Thirteen (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 11:20:22 AM AEST
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I dont believe for a second you will fight no longer. You seem to be the type to struggle on even through the worst of times. Great write again!

Re: Day Thirteen (User Rating: 1 )
by viola on Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 02:45:55 PM AEST
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you don't seem the type to give up the fight without a bit if kicking and screaming. Great poem...gonna look at pt2 now.

Re: Day Thirteen (User Rating: 1 )
by cryingonmyporch on Wednesday, 27th November 2002 @ 12:52:34 AM AEST
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I have one word for you
"SWEET"
Amy

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