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[sid] => 60475
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => motivation for my lines
[time] => 2004-08-17 16:26:59
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[bodytext] => i dedicate each and every word to you the point, don't matter none, cuz you'll never see em' or read them for as long as i sat here tryin to find the perfect rhymes you never been captivated, not by mines and to think you: my motivation... i sits here again and again hour after hour, rearranging the same 26 letters to express what i'm feelin for you to go and say it's OK it ain't ok to tell me what i feel ain't nothin more than a feelin' that what i write is nothin like anything you're to ever see in stores you say it's just words i say it's my heart talkin to yours but you won't listen i've even written it down, but how many more ways must i scramble these letters, words, phrases, and verbs on paper or in plain english for you to understand what i'm tryin to say? you: the only critic i been trying to please it's jus how i view the world through my almond browns i only want the people to understand my minds thoughts, dreams and fantasy's I wanna be read worldwide and you's have the audacity to scream "you're thoughts ain't worth a dime, there's no way you can compete" well maybe the whole world could read em for free and you could cast dem down for lovin my rhymes or for the simple fact of them lovin me don't matter none cuz the limit, is my orange sky and well... "you ain't nothin more to me but motivation for my lines" [comments] => 1 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 43 [informant] => taintedorange21 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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