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Poetry in words be nice to say hello
Haunting smile would capture my heart
Words that you write state of the art

Let me feel your eyes piercing my soul
A voice calling me feelings beyond control
Like a fading melody memories of a song
Echo the lyrics something inside so strong

Let me trace the outline of your lips
Let me feel the thrusting of your hips
Bedroom eyes hypnotic consign
Can you feel the temptation so fine

Let me devour you channel the link
Drown in your passion catch a wink
Satin pillows brush against the skin
Total loss of grace an immortal sin

My lips long for the flick of your tongue
Let me taste your sweet honey I long
Let me be your loving angel divine
Karma entwined in silver lace vine

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LET ME>>>>

Contributed by sweetangeluk on Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 11:25:39 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Let me desire you imagine go slow
Poetry in words be nice to say hello
Haunting smile would capture my heart
Words that you write state of the art

Let me feel your eyes piercing my soul
A voice calling me feelings beyond control
Like a fading melody memories of a song
Echo the lyrics something inside so strong

Let me trace the outline of your lips
Let me feel the thrusting of your hips
Bedroom eyes hypnotic consign
Can you feel the temptation so fine

Let me devour you channel the link
Drown in your passion catch a wink
Satin pillows brush against the skin
Total loss of grace an immortal sin

My lips long for the flick of your tongue
Let me taste your sweet honey I long
Let me be your loving angel divine
Karma entwined in silver lace vine

Copyright © sweetangeluk ... [ 2004-08-17 11:25:39]
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Re: LET ME>>>> (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 11:42:48 AM AEST
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I can feel the thread of passion running through this piece
Good write

steve

Re: LET ME>>>> (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 12:05:10 PM AEST
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great write,

pixie xx

Re: LET ME>>>> (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 01:38:02 PM AEST
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This is good although I should stay the route of purity.

Re: LET ME>>>> (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 01:57:03 PM AEST
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Haunting smile would capture my heart
Words that you write state of the art

Awesome....simply magnificent!

Re: LET ME>>>> (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 08:39:37 AM AEST
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what an expressive love poem. Thank you for a very good read.
bernard.

Re: LET ME>>>> (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 08:45:49 PM AEST
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Beautifully sensual.....
Jenni

Re: LET ME>>>> (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 01:54:17 AM AEST
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Awesomely beautifull, passonate write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: LET ME>>>> (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 06:35:03 PM AEST
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As I was browsing your poetry I had a sudden realization that all the ones i'm drawn to I have read numerous times. You must submit some new ones and soon! Please?

Words are incredibly powerful. Enticing, sensual & gorgeous would be the description to accurately summarize this one..

Wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kie

Re: LET ME>>>> (User Rating: 1 )
by SimplyMe on Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 03:17:31 PM AEST
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Wo0! Steamy and full of passion from the first line all the way down to the last. I really really liked this poem!! Not only are you a great writer you go bold! I admire that in you. Wonderful job!!

~Alucia~

Re: LET ME>>>> (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 02:58:20 PM AEST
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Hehe! I see you were saucy even back then ; )
Nicely done with this write. It's rich with imagery, and feeling. So, who's the lucky one that inspires all these lusty poems?? lol

Scorp.

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