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Array ( [sid] => 60398 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I can't wait to be me [time] => 2004-08-16 23:24:40 [hometext] => i found this in an old notebook of mine. it's about 3 years old [bodytext] => I lost the key to unlock my head
I don't want to be, so I stare instead
There's only one way for me to feel the warmth
But like a drug it settles, then I hurt much more

4 seconds of freedom isn't worth the time
That I spend frozen in my mind
Whoever has this cage around my soul
Please leave, please go
Leave me alone

If you can open me up to the world that I see
I will love you forever
I can't wait to be me [comments] => 3 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 61 [informant] => the_story_of_the_year [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

I can't wait to be me

Contributed by the_story_of_the_year on Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 11:24:40 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I lost the key to unlock my head
I don't want to be, so I stare instead
There's only one way for me to feel the warmth
But like a drug it settles, then I hurt much more

4 seconds of freedom isn't worth the time
That I spend frozen in my mind
Whoever has this cage around my soul
Please leave, please go
Leave me alone

If you can open me up to the world that I see
I will love you forever
I can't wait to be me

Copyright © the_story_of_the_year ... [ 2004-08-16 23:24:40]
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Re: I can't wait to be me (User Rating: 1 )
by corrupted_minds on Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 03:42:36 AM AEST
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I can really feel the emotions you are trying to get across. Good Write.
Corrupted_minds

Re: I can't wait to be me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 09:00:02 AM AEST
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The opening line really draws one into the poem; this poem seems so well-written.

Re: I can't wait to be me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 09:56:50 PM AEST
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awesome, truly amazing

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