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Array ( [sid] => 60370 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Dont [time] => 2004-08-16 21:17:36 [hometext] => [bodytext] => i wanna make you know exactly how i feel when i say im feeling grey
i wanna spin you around inside my head but i dont know just how to let you in
im clinging hard and sheilding you
ill ask you one last time if you wanna feel it to
but you dont answer clear...cuz your head's so thick by now after an entire year

i'd be glad for your minute inside of me
to feel those holes inside my brain
i'd be glad for your time to hurt a little everyday
taking you back through words isnt all i have to say
i'd be glad if you could just understand me for a bit
to have you feel those scars and bruises in the underlying of my skin
i'd be glad if you knew but you dont

i conquered fear i let you back in to warm me up
but im so cold i forgot to close the door after you stepped into my heart
theres a sense of saying im sad but its not like you know what im saying
you havent been by yourself for a minute to know how id die cuz im so alone
and i know that half the time you dont say it but you know im crying on the phone

i'd be glad for your minute inside of me
to feel those holes inside my brain
i'd be glad for your time to hurt a little everyday
taking you back through words isnt all i have to say
i'd be glad if you could just understand me for a bit
to have you feel those scars and bruises in the underlying of my skin
i'd be glad if you knew but you dont

i wanna talk softly to you but i know you take everything to hard
i cant tell you that theres more to me cuz you dont even know my strongest part
you never got hurt by me so its hard to let you know my pain
theres a past you never saw so you dont bother to look back to your shame

i'd be glad for your minute inside of me
to feel those holes inside my brain
i'd be glad for your time to hurt a little everyday
taking you back through words isnt all i have to say
i'd be glad if you could just understand me for a bit
to have you feel those scars and bruises in the underlying of my skin
i'd be glad if you knew but you dont
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You Dont

Contributed by lovelybones on Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 09:17:36 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



i wanna make you know exactly how i feel when i say im feeling grey
i wanna spin you around inside my head but i dont know just how to let you in
im clinging hard and sheilding you
ill ask you one last time if you wanna feel it to
but you dont answer clear...cuz your head's so thick by now after an entire year

i'd be glad for your minute inside of me
to feel those holes inside my brain
i'd be glad for your time to hurt a little everyday
taking you back through words isnt all i have to say
i'd be glad if you could just understand me for a bit
to have you feel those scars and bruises in the underlying of my skin
i'd be glad if you knew but you dont

i conquered fear i let you back in to warm me up
but im so cold i forgot to close the door after you stepped into my heart
theres a sense of saying im sad but its not like you know what im saying
you havent been by yourself for a minute to know how id die cuz im so alone
and i know that half the time you dont say it but you know im crying on the phone

i'd be glad for your minute inside of me
to feel those holes inside my brain
i'd be glad for your time to hurt a little everyday
taking you back through words isnt all i have to say
i'd be glad if you could just understand me for a bit
to have you feel those scars and bruises in the underlying of my skin
i'd be glad if you knew but you dont

i wanna talk softly to you but i know you take everything to hard
i cant tell you that theres more to me cuz you dont even know my strongest part
you never got hurt by me so its hard to let you know my pain
theres a past you never saw so you dont bother to look back to your shame

i'd be glad for your minute inside of me
to feel those holes inside my brain
i'd be glad for your time to hurt a little everyday
taking you back through words isnt all i have to say
i'd be glad if you could just understand me for a bit
to have you feel those scars and bruises in the underlying of my skin
i'd be glad if you knew but you dont




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Re: You Dont (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 10:45:48 PM AEST
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nOT A BAD SONG ,GLAD YOU JOINED THIS SITE GREAT WORK! cHRISTINA


Re: You Dont (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 01:20:01 PM AEST
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I really like this line " i wanna talk softly to you but i know you take everything to hard " The whole song is well written. Would love to hear your melody.

Nazmythian ~




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