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have u ever needed something but couldn't make it done

Have you ever tried to follow but lost the track
got stuck in a hollow with no turn back

Have you ever layed on the grass open armed and closed your eyes
fighting memories in which a part of you slowly dies

Have you ever pretended enjoying your time,
having fun..when nothing works fine

Have you ever hid your pain behind a fake smile
holding tears from flowing for long long time

If u dont then watch me laugh
and if you listen, you could hear my cry
where is he!?my missing half
what i show is just a lie [comments] => 4 [counter] => 234 [topic] => 22 [informant] => gina [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 24 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Wonders

Contributed by gina on Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 11:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Have you ever wondered what a day would be like without a sun
have u ever needed something but couldn't make it done

Have you ever tried to follow but lost the track
got stuck in a hollow with no turn back

Have you ever layed on the grass open armed and closed your eyes
fighting memories in which a part of you slowly dies

Have you ever pretended enjoying your time,
having fun..when nothing works fine

Have you ever hid your pain behind a fake smile
holding tears from flowing for long long time

If u dont then watch me laugh
and if you listen, you could hear my cry
where is he!?my missing half
what i show is just a lie

Copyright Â© gina ... [ 2002-11-01 11:15:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Wonders (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 01:45:37 PM AEST
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Great write! Yes I have wondered this, and have done some of it too so I know! Christina

Re: Wonders (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 01:55:10 PM AEST
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Ok how do you know me?
I'm just kidden, but i've been
here before, maybe i still am
there lol..Great write
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: Wonders (User Rating: 1 )
by Opium on Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 01:33:27 AM AEST
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You describe a very living example that we all have experienced, good writing Gina.

Re: Wonders (User Rating: 1 )
by Tyes on Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 09:29:20 PM AEST
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An extremely beautiful piece !

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