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Will You Miss Us

Contributed by cheech on Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 03:12:48 PM in AEST
Topic: FathersDayPoems



If we say good-bye
will you die
will you miss us
and put up a fuss

Dear dad,
would you care
if we left
or will you say''thats not fair"

we're not deaf
we can hear you
say do this do that

you said i was fat
jamie is dumb
and dave sits on his thumb

now thats not fair
we sit there listening to you
complane and blame
but never about yourself

Listen to me
can you see
we're ***** off

you not only drove yourself to drink
you drove us to

People wonder why we live like this
people think we're rebels
we don't complane or blame much
but when it comes to life we blame you

we're letting go of the clutch
we're going to do this
will you miss us?





Copyright © cheech ... [ 2004-08-16 15:12:48]
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Re: Will You Miss Us (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 03:37:15 PM AEST
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I see now where the sage advice came from. Great understanding of life. Nicely done here!
Angel always...godspeed my friend...joni 0:-)


Re: Will You Miss Us (User Rating: 1 )
by Solnubis on Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 04:32:43 PM AEST
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Nicely written and to the point.




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