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raw love
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 12:52:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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cheating
nasty sex
isnt what this is about
its raw love
tearing my heart in two
avoiding eyes
cold prescence
sleepy kisses
bored hugs
this is you all over
beneath her lipstick
she suduced you
i doubt i care
i couldnt live with myself if i cheated
but im not you
and i know your a player
go get 'em then!
why you hanging around here
were no love appear
it might be fun
sleeping around
while im all alone
i dont thinks its funny
i dont find it sad
no tears will fall from these eyes
no blood will pump
the toxic air will not enter my lungs
im fresh and new
and im gettin rid of you
ive gotta go now
bye boy
this raw love aint gonna play me like a toy!
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Hannah_Heaven
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2004-08-16 12:52:21]
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Re: raw love
(User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 12:54:23 PM AEST
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| crisp, sharp, powerful piece of work. |
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Re: raw love
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by pixie on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 01:03:29 PM AEST
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hmmmm me likes :) great poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: raw love
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 04:23:49 PM AEST
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avoiding eyes
cold prescence
sleepy kisses
bored hugs
terrific lines! |
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