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Array ( [sid] => 60314 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => -Invisible- [time] => 2004-08-16 12:24:44 [hometext] => [bodytext] => As I slip into the darkness,
The world seems to get colder,
As I take each step,
I turn more invisible.

No-one seems to care,
For what I do or say,
Im just another human to this world,
Trying to live my life from day to day.

I wish that I could show myself,
Show the world who I really am,
But Im afraid that if I try to,
I'll become invisible again.

So I'll just keep on walking towards my destination,
And maybe on day I'll reach it,
And no longer be invisible. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 61 [informant] => starryskyez09 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

-Invisible-

Contributed by starryskyez09 on Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 12:24:44 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

As I slip into the darkness,
The world seems to get colder,
As I take each step,
I turn more invisible.

No-one seems to care,
For what I do or say,
Im just another human to this world,
Trying to live my life from day to day.

I wish that I could show myself,
Show the world who I really am,
But Im afraid that if I try to,
I'll become invisible again.

So I'll just keep on walking towards my destination,
And maybe on day I'll reach it,
And no longer be invisible.

Copyright © starryskyez09 ... [ 2004-08-16 12:24:44]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: -Invisible- (User Rating: 1 )
by inertia on Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 12:43:04 PM AEST
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i often feel invisibe or dead t the world so, it was really easy for me to get into this poem. howver, for somone who may not know the feeling i think you could deliver it differently, make t flow a little more. i'm not knocking on your work, i like it. thanks

Re: -Invisible- (User Rating: 1 )
by kyletycz on Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 06:17:10 PM AEST
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good poem, i think the thing that scares me the most in life is when i die, if nobody noticed, and thus i feel like i walk through life trying my best to make an impression, but even though i doubt my biggest fear will happen, it still scares me, but i do my best to aviod it, nice write

l8r

Ninja Tycz

Re: -Invisible- (User Rating: 1 )
by jeannoh on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 11:00:06 AM AEST
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I can relate to this poem
For many years in life I felt that way.
Your feelings shared that is a definate step
shareing your poems with the world is a Wonderful way to be seen!...I love your work please keep writing..,,,thank you so much
Jeannoh

Re: -Invisible- (User Rating: 1 )
by flamingblade on Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 07:29:12 PM AEST
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it's like you are talking about me!so true!
So good expressing!

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