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Array ( [sid] => 60294 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tonight I perfected my suicide [time] => 2004-08-16 06:58:35 [hometext] => Please have a read... comments are very welcome. Corrupted Minds [bodytext] => Life is death, and death is life,
Nothing can end this painful strife,
Live brings anger, life brings pain,
It toys with your heart like it's just a game,
Broken hearts and lonely souls,
No one cares when someone falls,
Corrupted minds and painful screams,
Tell me now what all of it means?
Shadows they lurk around every bend,
They hunt you down until the end,
You think you've found the light, but illusions are there,
To find the truth is really rare,
Lies are heard but the truth you crave,
You'll never know till your in your grave,
If God is real, then why is there sorrow?
Why does he forsake us to see tomorrow?
There is no heaven, you want no creed,
In the dark it's love you'll need,
I've bled for you, I've tried to die,
It never works so I always cry,
I'll take the rope and tie it tight,
Wont live to see another night,
But I'll slit my wrists just in case,
I'll leave this world without a trace,
And when you saw me I hope you cried,
Cos tonight I perfected my suicide,
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Tonight I perfected my suicide

Contributed by corrupted_minds on Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 06:58:35 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Life is death, and death is life,
Nothing can end this painful strife,
Live brings anger, life brings pain,
It toys with your heart like it's just a game,
Broken hearts and lonely souls,
No one cares when someone falls,
Corrupted minds and painful screams,
Tell me now what all of it means?
Shadows they lurk around every bend,
They hunt you down until the end,
You think you've found the light, but illusions are there,
To find the truth is really rare,
Lies are heard but the truth you crave,
You'll never know till your in your grave,
If God is real, then why is there sorrow?
Why does he forsake us to see tomorrow?
There is no heaven, you want no creed,
In the dark it's love you'll need,
I've bled for you, I've tried to die,
It never works so I always cry,
I'll take the rope and tie it tight,
Wont live to see another night,
But I'll slit my wrists just in case,
I'll leave this world without a trace,
And when you saw me I hope you cried,
Cos tonight I perfected my suicide,

Copyright © corrupted_minds ... [ 2004-08-16 06:58:35]
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Re: Tonight I perfected my suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by cj_ranson on Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 07:07:25 AM AEST
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Very powerfull, reel good stuff

Cj

Re: Tonight I perfected my suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Babigurl on Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 07:25:06 AM AEST
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Sad poem but great. i can relate so much ,i love the way you made the flow of your poem:) beautiful keep writing!

Re: Tonight I perfected my suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 07:41:54 AM AEST
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this is very sad, but it was extremly well written.
I'm glad to see u venting your thoughts, just remember no matter what happens or happened, suicide just aint worth it
ALex

Re: Tonight I perfected my suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Kevin on Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 10:30:57 AM AEST
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that was an awesome poem, i really loved it. it honestly gave me chills.
-Kevin

Re: Tonight I perfected my suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 12:35:27 PM AEST
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wow, a very deep and sad write, written so well,

great stuff,

pixie xx

Re: Tonight I perfected my suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by AndreaJ on Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 01:03:45 PM AEST
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beautiful..... exactly how i feel...

Re: Tonight I perfected my suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by losthope on Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 03:18:20 PM AEST
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that was an excellent poem if i could express myself as good as u have id actually be happy with my work im not gonna say i know how u feel but i have a good idea.. good job,

%* julia*%

Re: Tonight I perfected my suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 02:19:40 AM AEST
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nice work. Powerful, full of emotion.

love always, dizza
xoxoxox

Re: Tonight I perfected my suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by allymp on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 05:32:57 PM AEST
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great poem once again! I always enjoy reading your poems. And as ive said before...just remember suicide is never the answer
lots of love*allymp

Re: Tonight I perfected my suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by TwEeK on Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 12:28:47 PM AEST
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wow! flowing with sadness, etched with pain!
i could almost see you hanging there dripping with blood, the imagry was so thick!
amazing write!!!!

gone CraZy, back soon.
Tweek

Re: Tonight I perfected my suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 07:13:35 PM AEST
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these poems are all great
and this one is real deep and so well written
i wish i had your talent

catz77

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