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Array ( [sid] => 6025 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I Wonder [time] => 2002-11-01 07:30:00 [hometext] => I made this when my cousin, Had a miscarriage! Very sad, Really hurt us! [bodytext] => Wonder what you were thinking,
Wonder what you were doing.
Are you sucking your thumb,
Or are you laying there.
Is your lungs breathing.
I will never know.
I see you on the ultrasound.
Dear sweet baby your so little round.
What color are your eyes
What color is your hair.
Do you have ten toes.
Or a little button nose.
I will never know,
What was your first word,
When did you say goodbye.
I look back in vain,
Your not even there.
But I guess dear sweet baby
I will never see you here.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 39 [informant] => chantal [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

I Wonder

Contributed by chantal on Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 07:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Wonder what you were thinking,
Wonder what you were doing.
Are you sucking your thumb,
Or are you laying there.
Is your lungs breathing.
I will never know.
I see you on the ultrasound.
Dear sweet baby your so little round.
What color are your eyes
What color is your hair.
Do you have ten toes.
Or a little button nose.
I will never know,
What was your first word,
When did you say goodbye.
I look back in vain,
Your not even there.
But I guess dear sweet baby
I will never see you here.

Copyright Â© chantal ... [ 2002-11-01 07:30:00]
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Re: I Wonder (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 07:33:54 AM AEST
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This is so very sad, it brings
tears to my eyes, i can relate to
this twice over.
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: I Wonder (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 01:53:21 PM AEST
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AAww how sincere & sad,loosing a baby I couldnt imagine the pain! Wonderful words!
Christina

Re: I Wonder (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 02:21:14 PM AEST
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So sad and touching..I know the feelings exactly......
Hugs,
Jenni

Re: I Wonder (User Rating: 1 )
by chantal on Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 04:39:57 AM AEST
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THX! To you all, To this poem she had carried this baby for weeks after knowing it was gone, Then the baby was slowly leaving her body, Then she went had a DC , Yet she had another miscarriage afterwards, Same thing happen, But there is a happy ending , She did after three times , The third she now has a Beautiful little Boy. The other poem that was made is called YOU BOTH!
This is the baby talking to her and hubby!From first miscarriage!

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