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Array ( [sid] => 60238 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Don't Let Go [time] => 2004-08-15 19:15:36 [hometext] => this is about a good friend of mine that wanted to die and i wrote this for him and he started to realize but now hes gone and i miss him so much,enjoy! [bodytext] => Laying here
you're think'n about being there
but no one knows where

It seems as if no one care
but everybody stares
and you think it's not fair

Don't let go
I'm try'n to show
you that you don't have
to go

Hold on,you're going
somewhere,don't let
everything fall apart

You're loved and if you
go you'd be missed
we all know you get dissed
and ***** off everyday

Don't let go
I'm try'n to show
you that you don't have
to go

Theres so much to
live for,a bunch of fun
you think it's done
but it's not

we walk and
we talk about
you letting go

Don't let go
I'm try'n to show
you that you don't have
to go

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 21 [informant] => savedbydeath [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Don't Let Go

Contributed by savedbydeath on Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 07:15:36 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Laying here
you're think'n about being there
but no one knows where

It seems as if no one care
but everybody stares
and you think it's not fair

Don't let go
I'm try'n to show
you that you don't have
to go

Hold on,you're going
somewhere,don't let
everything fall apart

You're loved and if you
go you'd be missed
we all know you get dissed
and ***** off everyday

Don't let go
I'm try'n to show
you that you don't have
to go

Theres so much to
live for,a bunch of fun
you think it's done
but it's not

we walk and
we talk about
you letting go

Don't let go
I'm try'n to show
you that you don't have
to go

Copyright © savedbydeath ... [ 2004-08-15 19:15:36]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Don't Let Go (User Rating: 1 )
by cheech on Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 10:23:03 PM AEST
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Don't worry i miss dan 2,i think 'bout him constently,all we can do is hold our heads up high and wait for our turn when we see him once again,but really we see him all the time... in our dreams...take care awsome write hun

* cheech *

Re: Don't Let Go (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 04:45:07 PM AEST
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did you let your friend read this? amazing poem

- Bethani -

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