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You may be silent and isolated
But your voice is in me
You’re a star and I’m gonna make us big

I accepted the green paper
Acknowledged the receipts
I guess its wrong but
I’ll wink all the way home

Like a piggy pig pig
Hogging all the food
Except I’m storing it all for you
I won’t let the wolf blow through

I’ll tell it with rhythm
In a powerful moment
You’ll look down;
The floor spinning

I’m doing it all for you kid
I hope you understand
That without you
I’ll throw away all these grand plans
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Seeds and Mirrors

Contributed by overstated on Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 01:40:29 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

I’m doing it all for you kid
You may be silent and isolated
But your voice is in me
You’re a star and I’m gonna make us big

I accepted the green paper
Acknowledged the receipts
I guess its wrong but
I’ll wink all the way home

Like a piggy pig pig
Hogging all the food
Except I’m storing it all for you
I won’t let the wolf blow through

I’ll tell it with rhythm
In a powerful moment
You’ll look down;
The floor spinning

I’m doing it all for you kid
I hope you understand
That without you
I’ll throw away all these grand plans

Copyright Â© overstated ... [ 2004-08-15 13:40:29]
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Re: Seeds and Mirrors (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 01:45:05 PM AEST
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excellent write..
takecare,

pixie xx

Re: Seeds and Mirrors (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 02:05:18 PM AEST
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This was wonderful to read ..... interesting too....
Jenni

Re: Seeds and Mirrors (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 07:25:01 PM AEST
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Makes one think just how many stake their lives on success in this way. Very interesting,
Rita

Re: Seeds and Mirrors (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 08:00:24 AM AEST
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you have an excellent stlye for rhyming!
this is an amazing poem! i love how you've written it so much!

Re: Seeds and Mirrors (User Rating: 1 )
by carmen_queasy on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 10:13:36 AM AEST
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I felt tears in my eyes reading this. Great poem.

Re: Seeds and Mirrors (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 02:51:30 PM AEST
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Very good writing. I don't think there is any stronger Earthly luv than a parent for the child.
Someday this will be really appreciated.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

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