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Array ( [sid] => 60175 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blue, Black and pink [time] => 2004-08-15 00:47:38 [hometext] => Nothing special I'm not doing well at the minte, one of my bad days. but have a read. Corrupted_minds [bodytext] => Paint my body blue, black and pink,
throw me a rope, cos I’m starting to sink,
Was alive, but dead in a blink,
And now I’m gone your starting to think,
Darkness it covers, illusions they hide,
Took advantage of me whenever I cried,
In the shadows i lost my pride,
Where you left me alone I died,
This painful place has made me kneel,
I tried to buy, but I had to steal,
You say I had your love but I no longer feel,
There is no God, no need to pray,
When I’m out of this hell, rapture I’ll stay,
Dreamed about this just the other day,
My eyes aren’t blind, but all I see is grey,
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 32 [informant] => corrupted_minds [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Blue, Black and pink

Contributed by corrupted_minds on Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 12:47:38 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Paint my body blue, black and pink,
throw me a rope, cos I’m starting to sink,
Was alive, but dead in a blink,
And now I’m gone your starting to think,
Darkness it covers, illusions they hide,
Took advantage of me whenever I cried,
In the shadows i lost my pride,
Where you left me alone I died,
This painful place has made me kneel,
I tried to buy, but I had to steal,
You say I had your love but I no longer feel,
There is no God, no need to pray,
When I’m out of this hell, rapture I’ll stay,
Dreamed about this just the other day,
My eyes aren’t blind, but all I see is grey,

Copyright Â© corrupted_minds ... [ 2004-08-15 00:47:38]
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Re: Blue, Black and pink (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 02:49:42 AM AEST
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good work. Very nice, a rope is here all you gotta do is
catch it

love always, dizza
xoxox

Re: Blue, Black and pink (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 03:09:55 AM AEST
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Very sad but u say it all well.
Hang tuff.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: Blue, Black and pink (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 08:56:17 AM AEST
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Not a bad poem at all

I find some times I'm itching to submit a poem and I can't think, theres nothing there!...
so...
if you felt like that when you submitted this poem WELL...
you did a terrific job,,,
heaps better than what I could 'think up"
that's for sure...
cheers

Re: Blue, Black and pink (User Rating: 1 )
by cj_ranson on Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 03:34:01 AM AEST
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great work

Cj

Re: Blue, Black and pink (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 05:40:21 AM AEST
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this has excellent uses of words and phrases!
great job!
from deathdrop.

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