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Array ( [sid] => 60164 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If One Day [time] => 2004-08-14 23:03:45 [hometext] => *sighs* I am as pathetic as wachumiri with these love poems! Strangely, I am single, and contentedly so. Alas, I still have the occasional anticipation that my love will not be that which is unrequited.. [bodytext] => For the touch of your hand
Caressing my cheek
What a whisper of your undying love
Will arise from in deep
How your lips would taste
Would they be sweet
If one day
Ours would meet...
But not now.

For mind, soul, and spirit
To melt as one
To seek love
From the One who gave it
Together.
Forever molded
From the work of His hands
A beautiful replica
Of He and His bride...
But not yet.

To have your love
As my own
And my life
In your hands to hold
To be at your side forevermore
For us to meander life's path together
To share each turn and twist
Not alone
But together
As one....
Maybe someday.

If ever this day comes
That love may have us meet as one
Your heart as mine
My heart as yours
Whenever this day comes...
I am ready. [comments] => 10 [counter] => 273 [topic] => 2 [informant] => faith_my_eyes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 35 [ratings] => 7 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

If One Day

Contributed by faith_my_eyes on Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 11:03:45 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

For the touch of your hand
Caressing my cheek
What a whisper of your undying love
Will arise from in deep
How your lips would taste
Would they be sweet
If one day
Ours would meet...
But not now.

For mind, soul, and spirit
To melt as one
To seek love
From the One who gave it
Together.
Forever molded
From the work of His hands
A beautiful replica
Of He and His bride...
But not yet.

To have your love
As my own
And my life
In your hands to hold
To be at your side forevermore
For us to meander life's path together
To share each turn and twist
Not alone
But together
As one....
Maybe someday.

If ever this day comes
That love may have us meet as one
Your heart as mine
My heart as yours
Whenever this day comes...
I am ready.

Copyright Â© faith_my_eyes ... [ 2004-08-14 23:03:45]
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Re: If One Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 11:33:31 PM AEST
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Pathetic as Wachumiri? Impossible!
Nice piece. Very sensitive. And I do hope it will come indeed for you. Slàn gu dearbh.
Andrew

Re: If One Day (User Rating: 1 )
by SocialMisfit on Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 12:43:12 AM AEST
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dont worry i have felt that way also but i have found with my faith a realization that if i was ment to have a person to love he would provide so just have faith.

Re: If One Day (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 08:45:40 AM AEST
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watch out that Mr Somebody-oneday hey...

what a lot of love inside your soul

you release it in this nice write!

cheers!

Re: If One Day (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 09:54:51 AM AEST
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Oh yea baby it sounds like you are ready....well written.

Re: If One Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 03:22:48 PM AEST
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One day a knight will ride into your world and sweep you off your feet.
Look out for someone on a white horse, lol

Steve

Re: If One Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 04:40:39 PM AEST
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I agree with Andrew, it's not THAT pathetic. It is actually a very beautiful poem. It brings out all the beauty in your heart in an unbelievable way.
I have but one question. Have you shown it to him? Ok, you're probably right, it's not the right time for that.
Take care.
David

Re: If One Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 11:37:54 PM AEST
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This is lovely. It is, unfortunately, what many take for granted when they have it. It is without it, perhaps, that we see it - every bit of it - as so clearly wonderful.

Very nicely done!

Feeling rather pathetic myself at times,
SNM

Re: If One Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 04:09:24 PM AEST
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wow i thought this poem was very very good indeed. 'If ever this day comes
That love may have us meet as one' - nice line!

Re: If One Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Nezenic on Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 02:39:55 PM AEST
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I hope you find the one for you. We are born with a pair of eyes and ears, but the reason we are only born with one heart is that we are meant to search for the second one in order to complete the pair.

Re: If One Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 10:10:10 PM AEST
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Emily this is so beautifully written. It really stood out for me. Your heart shines radinatly through this brilliant poem. You can express yourself so well and u know exactly what u want. May the person who captures ur heart treat it with the utmost love and respect that it truly deserves.
*hugs*
Sue

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