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Array ( [sid] => 60162 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hollow withought you [time] => 2004-08-14 22:53:35 [hometext] => i wrote this while on a missions trip to my own community it was the coolest thing ever it deepened my faith so much that i had to post my poems i had writen for crist and no longer hide them [bodytext] => It would be rather hollow
if all I did to follow
was trail along behind him -
if only I could find him!
In love he comes to reach me
because he longs to teach me
to walk my life beside him
his love in me residing.

He always knows to find me
and calls to leave behind me
the idols I’ve been raising -
my idle ways of praising.

He gave a total dying,
expects my self-denying
that in my total giving
I’ll know his inward living.

Come, Lord, you lead me on!
I know I’m not alone -
each day is fresh and new,
I’m walking it with you!
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 11 [informant] => SocialMisfit [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )

Hollow withought you

Contributed by SocialMisfit on Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 10:53:35 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

It would be rather hollow
if all I did to follow
was trail along behind him -
if only I could find him!
In love he comes to reach me
because he longs to teach me
to walk my life beside him
his love in me residing.

He always knows to find me
and calls to leave behind me
the idols I’ve been raising -
my idle ways of praising.

He gave a total dying,
expects my self-denying
that in my total giving
I’ll know his inward living.

Come, Lord, you lead me on!
I know I’m not alone -
each day is fresh and new,
I’m walking it with you!

Copyright Â© SocialMisfit ... [ 2004-08-14 22:53:35]
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Re: Hollow withought you (User Rating: 1 )
by SocialMisfit on Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 10:55:46 PM AEST
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sry for miss spellings im not the best of writers so stick with me lol.

Re: Hollow withought you (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 11:06:25 PM AEST
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It is wonderful to hear of the work God has done in your heart! good write!

Re: Hollow withought you (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 03:35:37 AM AEST
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Very good work!
I luv your unique style.
A masterpeice to our master.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Hollow withought you (User Rating: 1 )
by mysticpoet on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 08:38:41 PM AEST
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Thank-you for sharing your prayer with us all
We all need to get get closer to our God
Keep sharing your faith with us all

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