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Array ( [sid] => 6013 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => She Knew [time] => 2002-11-01 00:00:00 [hometext] => I met this person, technically. I'm sure several of you have too. This is dedicated for her. [bodytext] => She knew it was near
How far would she go to accomplish it all
Was the fear overwhelming her mind
Was the modern day stress stealing her heart
But she knew, she knew she would over come it all
The odds were against
She never cared
Her life is a never ending tidal wave
You'll see it constantly clash against the obstacles of life

The respect I give
The unforgettable conversations read
I see her a strong and defined person
BUT she knew her life was going to be so
She had it all planned out
and not a soul knew
What was given to her was a will so strong
A will that over shadowed her pride

Why I gave such a damn over a matter so unreal
A person I never really met
Yet was lost in a world of desire and love..
...a world so far away from hers
She was so different
A person so distinguished amongst herself
Did she really fit in with it all
was she just a consumer of pain handed out every day
I do not know
But I wish I did
If I truely could help
I would have already did

BUT SHE KNEW that her time was here and no where else
My words I gave were so little to the life she lived
I now realize everythings taken for granted
Then I talk to her
and see shes granted a gift
a gift I never could have
A gift of strength
and a will untouched [comments] => 9 [counter] => 275 [topic] => 38 [informant] => amos [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Tributes )
She Knew

Contributed by amos on Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 12:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Tributes



She knew it was near
How far would she go to accomplish it all
Was the fear overwhelming her mind
Was the modern day stress stealing her heart
But she knew, she knew she would over come it all
The odds were against
She never cared
Her life is a never ending tidal wave
You'll see it constantly clash against the obstacles of life

The respect I give
The unforgettable conversations read
I see her a strong and defined person
BUT she knew her life was going to be so
She had it all planned out
and not a soul knew
What was given to her was a will so strong
A will that over shadowed her pride

Why I gave such a damn over a matter so unreal
A person I never really met
Yet was lost in a world of desire and love..
...a world so far away from hers
She was so different
A person so distinguished amongst herself
Did she really fit in with it all
was she just a consumer of pain handed out every day
I do not know
But I wish I did
If I truely could help
I would have already did

BUT SHE KNEW that her time was here and no where else
My words I gave were so little to the life she lived
I now realize everythings taken for granted
Then I talk to her
and see shes granted a gift
a gift I never could have
A gift of strength
and a will untouched




Copyright © amos ... [ 2002-11-01 00:00:00]
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Re: She Knew (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 12:07:57 AM AEST
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This is beautiful
i really enjoyed this amos
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.



Re: She Knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 12:15:07 AM AEST
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wonderful write Amos, (who might she be?)


Re: She Knew (User Rating: 1 )
by amos on Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 04:11:17 AM AEST
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well Val, I hope she reads it heh, I think she would recognize the detailing..and hopefully she'll leave a comment ;)


Re: She Knew (User Rating: 1 )
by LJ on Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 07:46:05 AM AEST
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This is beautiful.


Re: She Knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 08:59:34 AM AEST
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This is beautiful... Good write!


Re: She Knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 02:49:14 PM AEST
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This is a lovely poem, Amos...I hope she reads it....and enjoys it as much as we do...
Jenni


Re: She Knew (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 07:30:33 AM AEST
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This is sooo beautiful! But who is this??? :) I'm sure you'll tell me later (: Thanks for sending me here... it's a great write!!!

Ginnie


Re: She Knew (User Rating: 1 )
by amos on Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 12:40:01 PM AEST
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the answer is above me.


Re: She Knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Amazon on Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 08:19:54 PM AEST
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this is beautiful, i hope all the connections are made




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