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today I'm feeling really sad
but I must not show my feelings
instead I must hide it and feel glad
I help her to get ready
for her big step in life
I do her hair, pack her lunch
I fuss and hope she'll be alright
I look at her closely
I have to realise
that she is growing up now
but for me
she'll always be my baby
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first day at school

Contributed by inoc on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 03:37:26 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

My little girl is leaving me
today I'm feeling really sad
but I must not show my feelings
instead I must hide it and feel glad
I help her to get ready
for her big step in life
I do her hair, pack her lunch
I fuss and hope she'll be alright
I look at her closely
I have to realise
that she is growing up now
but for me
she'll always be my baby
in a school girls disguise

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Re: first day at school (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 03:41:52 PM AEST
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Aww, this is so sweet! She's lucky to have such a caring mother like you. Take care.
Katie

Re: first day at school (User Rating: 1 )
by Dusty on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 04:11:27 PM AEST
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The first day of school is always so hard. I cried at her first 1/2 day of K and then again at her first full day of 1st. I wonder if I will make it thise year without tears??? It's so sad to think of your little girl growing up...next comes dances, and proms and ~GASP~ Boys, cars ~shudders~ sweet write tho!!!
Best,
~Dusty~

Re: first day at school (User Rating: 1 )
by veramouse on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 04:49:56 PM AEST
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lovely poem, and something all mothers can identify with.

Re: first day at school (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 08:52:54 PM AEST
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Awwww how sweet!!! I am not a mother but I have been in this situation before....from both sides..
As a teacher I have seen many a mom shed a tear when they drop off their baby for their first day at school...
Lovely write...
Jenni

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