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Array ( [sid] => 60012 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => TIME'S GRAVE [time] => 2004-08-13 13:04:30 [hometext] => this woke me in the night to write.....comment if you like....oh... and read more of poems !! thanx [bodytext] => I stumpled upon my grave
Only I didn't know it was mine
Bound to lay by fate
Bound to death through time

My time was so short
But in my head so long
Time left me in a body bag
And my life sang a horible song

My grave was freshly dug
Layed with flowers everyday
Waiting for the time
When in it's tomb I would lay

Time sent me into a daze
Confused I lived my life
My grave always waiting
Time is so long.....But never long enough.

My clothes were always ready
The funeral and tears prepared
But time never made me ready
For my death that I feared

Stumbling upon my grave
I saw my name inscribed
Realizing I was a wondering ghost
Time had already taken my life.
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TIME'S GRAVE

Contributed by Alina on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 01:04:30 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

I stumpled upon my grave
Only I didn't know it was mine
Bound to lay by fate
Bound to death through time

My time was so short
But in my head so long
Time left me in a body bag
And my life sang a horible song

My grave was freshly dug
Layed with flowers everyday
Waiting for the time
When in it's tomb I would lay

Time sent me into a daze
Confused I lived my life
My grave always waiting
Time is so long.....But never long enough.

My clothes were always ready
The funeral and tears prepared
But time never made me ready
For my death that I feared

Stumbling upon my grave
I saw my name inscribed
Realizing I was a wondering ghost
Time had already taken my life.

Copyright © Alina ... [ 2004-08-13 13:04:30]
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Re: TIME'S GRAVE (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 01:20:20 PM AEST
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ow this is amazingly written, there's nothing more I can say other than bravo...

pixie xx

Re: TIME'S GRAVE (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 01:33:33 PM AEST
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That is incredible. If I was awakened by something like that, I would be scribbling all night long. Fantastic write.

Nazmythian

Re: TIME'S GRAVE (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 11:38:44 PM AEST
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Dang! This was Chilling but good! Christina

Re: TIME'S GRAVE (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 02:07:09 PM AEST
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really liked the line 'Time left me in a body bag' overall i think this is a superb poem - well thought out. superb.

Re: TIME'S GRAVE (User Rating: 1 )
by blackholesun on Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 02:43:43 PM AEST
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i really loved this alina!i once had a dream similar to this,in my dream i was staying the night in an old house,when a ghost appeared
i fell in love with him,he started to die and fade,so i killed myself to be with him,only for him to die again and im left alone remembering the girl at the front of my dream that was screaming at me,i wouldnt listen,but it was myself warning not to kill myself,i thought thatone was kind of creepy!well im glad you are writing more how many site points do you have so far?

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