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Array ( [sid] => 60006 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Come Home [time] => 2004-08-13 12:22:51 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Wishing you could come home,
It’s not the same when you’re down the phone,
Hearing your sweet voice in my ears,
Brings me to the brink of tears.

I can picture you sitting there,
Please come back & how me you care,
Throw your arms around my soul,
Bring me in from out in the cold.

I look up at our photo on the wall,
Really hope that it never falls,
I count the hours until we’re together,
Why does it feel like forever?

Time seems to stop when we are apart,
I keep being put back at the start,
My thoughts break free & run wild,
Just like the actions of a naughty child.

Are you thinking of me as I think of you?
Do you need me to stop you feeling blue,
I need you especially when I feel depressed,
I think with my feelings I have been unblessed.

They just won’t let me shake them off,
Often they decide to call my bluff,
I want to be happy when you’re not around,
But I always feel lost & never found.

I so want to laugh & to smile,
But in my world that’s out of style,
My thoughts trap me inside this cage,
Making me feel much older then my real age.

Many hours are spent watching the clock,
Listening to the constant tick tock,
Sat here wishing my life away,
So we will be together at the end of the day.


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Come Home

Contributed by pixie on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 12:22:51 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Wishing you could come home,
It’s not the same when you’re down the phone,
Hearing your sweet voice in my ears,
Brings me to the brink of tears.

I can picture you sitting there,
Please come back & how me you care,
Throw your arms around my soul,
Bring me in from out in the cold.

I look up at our photo on the wall,
Really hope that it never falls,
I count the hours until we’re together,
Why does it feel like forever?

Time seems to stop when we are apart,
I keep being put back at the start,
My thoughts break free & run wild,
Just like the actions of a naughty child.

Are you thinking of me as I think of you?
Do you need me to stop you feeling blue,
I need you especially when I feel depressed,
I think with my feelings I have been unblessed.

They just won’t let me shake them off,
Often they decide to call my bluff,
I want to be happy when you’re not around,
But I always feel lost & never found.

I so want to laugh & to smile,
But in my world that’s out of style,
My thoughts trap me inside this cage,
Making me feel much older then my real age.

Many hours are spent watching the clock,
Listening to the constant tick tock,
Sat here wishing my life away,
So we will be together at the end of the day.






Copyright © pixie ... [ 2004-08-13 12:22:51]
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Re: Come Home (User Rating: 1 )
by CaddishCut on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 12:27:50 PM AEST
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Very pretty! And great flow.


Re: Come Home (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 02:55:20 PM AEST
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wistful - I've been there, Nice job


Re: Come Home (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 11:13:53 AM AEST
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another great one by you..I like this one quite alot..




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