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Array ( [sid] => 6 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hiden And Seek [time] => 2002-07-10 14:00:33 [hometext] => Hiden And Seek [bodytext] => You write me the part of a fool
And you get the part of an angel

I know it isn't fair
But I'm not one to complain

I have my demons under control
And the biggest dragon has been slain

But every time I listen to you it's lies
All of them.

From when the time I walked your dog and you said she ran away
And the time when we were young and about what your elders say.

Why do you do this?!?
All the time!

I get used to sweet old you
When you bring me flowers and roses
Then you leave me in the fog
Maybe I should play hide and seek
Let me go and hide [comments] => 3 [counter] => 859 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Bjork_Pagan_Poetry [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 22 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Hiden And Seek

Contributed by Bjork_Pagan_Poetry on Wednesday, 10th July 2002 @ 02:00:33 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

You write me the part of a fool
And you get the part of an angel

I know it isn't fair
But I'm not one to complain

I have my demons under control
And the biggest dragon has been slain

But every time I listen to you it's lies
All of them.

From when the time I walked your dog and you said she ran away
And the time when we were young and about what your elders say.

Why do you do this?!?
All the time!

I get used to sweet old you
When you bring me flowers and roses
Then you leave me in the fog
Maybe I should play hide and seek
Let me go and hide

Copyright Â© Bjork_Pagan_Poetry ... [ 2002-07-10 14:00:33]
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Re: Hiden And Seek (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 08:54:59 AM AEST
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Powerful and mature writing...well done
Chrissie

Re: Hiden And Seek (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 02:32:28 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this one
Great write
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: Hiden And Seek (User Rating: 1 )
by trenikia on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 01:02:50 PM AEST
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u can write some very intresting poems from what i've read. keep up the work

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