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Array ( [sid] => 59985 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Would you? Could you? [time] => 2004-08-13 06:42:20 [hometext] => its a poem that explains what i want but can he give it most of it sounds quite selfish but its based on my sister not me [bodytext] => Would you understand?
Would you hold my hand?
Would you wipe away a tear?
Would you hold me near?

Could you ever understand?
Could you hold my hand?
Could you wipe away a tear?
Could you hold me near?

Would you have a moment spare?
Would you say that you care?
Would you give all I need?
Would you give up any greed?

Could you have a moment spare?
Could you say that you care?
Could you give me all I need?
Could you give up any greed?

Would you tell me how much I mean?
Would you tell me what you've seen?
Would you stop me if I were to cry?
Would you save me if I were to die?

Could you tell me how much I mean?
Could you tell me what you've seen?
Could you stop me if I were to cry?
Could you save me if I were to die?

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Would you? Could you?

Contributed by kammie on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 06:42:20 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Would you understand?
Would you hold my hand?
Would you wipe away a tear?
Would you hold me near?

Could you ever understand?
Could you hold my hand?
Could you wipe away a tear?
Could you hold me near?

Would you have a moment spare?
Would you say that you care?
Would you give all I need?
Would you give up any greed?

Could you have a moment spare?
Could you say that you care?
Could you give me all I need?
Could you give up any greed?

Would you tell me how much I mean?
Would you tell me what you've seen?
Would you stop me if I were to cry?
Would you save me if I were to die?

Could you tell me how much I mean?
Could you tell me what you've seen?
Could you stop me if I were to cry?
Could you save me if I were to die?

Copyright © kammie ... [ 2004-08-13 06:42:20]
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Re: Would you? Could you? (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 06:57:54 AM AEST
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I like how you repeated each verse twice
it really puts the point accross....
cheers!

Re: Would you? Could you? (User Rating: 1 )
by Dralion on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 07:06:30 AM AEST
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Almost sounds like song lyrics.

Re: Would you? Could you? (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 09:08:02 AM AEST
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very powerful poem. Great questions to express your emotions.

Kimberly

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