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Array ( [sid] => 5998 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Devil's Twin [time] => 2002-10-31 20:40:00 [hometext] => i kept going back into a relationship with a guy who kept treating me badly so i finally got the courage to leave that town.. actually im out of that country now.... but letting all u gals know that you will destroy yourself if you stay with someone who doesn't appreciate u!!! [bodytext] => Your sick games
Are still stuck in my head
Won’t leave me alone
Keep harassing me instead
You truly are sick
Manage to attempt again
Wish I could strangle you
In misery with pain
Such a manipulative
Always plays an act
I’m more pathetic
For staying on this damn track
You are the devil’s twin
Live in visual perception
You are always right
Claim it was my self-deception
Come on to say another "hey"
Only when you’re alone
I won’t play as your puppet
Go be a disgrace on your own
Keep changing the subject
You’re trying to con me back
But this time it's really over
I’m not around for your next attack
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 309 [topic] => 6 [informant] => rockshv [notes] => ......Edited by mod_6 for language...27-03-04 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

The Devil's Twin

Contributed by rockshv on Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 08:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Your sick games
Are still stuck in my head
Won’t leave me alone
Keep harassing me instead
You truly are sick
Manage to attempt again
Wish I could strangle you
In misery with pain
Such a manipulative
Always plays an act
I’m more pathetic
For staying on this damn track
You are the devil’s twin
Live in visual perception
You are always right
Claim it was my self-deception
Come on to say another "hey"
Only when you’re alone
I won’t play as your puppet
Go be a disgrace on your own
Keep changing the subject
You’re trying to con me back
But this time it's really over
I’m not around for your next attack

Copyright Â© rockshv ... [ 2002-10-31 20:40:00]
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Re: The Devil's Twin (User Rating: 1 )
by norticus on Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 01:19:58 AM AEST
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God the guy sounds like me. A bowl full of fun. I give it a 4.3 because it sounds like it's about me... I realize of course that it's not, don't make me smack ya'!

Re: The Devil's Twin (User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 01:55:39 AM AEST
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Glad you got out of the situation, even if it meant you had to leave the country. I am reminded of a movie I saw, regarding a woman who moved to Afganistan with her husband and then was abused. She had to flee the country with her daughter in the cloak of night to escape him. Anyways, good write.

Re: The Devil's Twin (User Rating: 1 )
by rbps861 on Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 08:44:00 PM AEST
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lot of spunk,good job

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