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He said I hate you
He never said goodbye
Her tears were shed
In the dark in bed
And she never said goodbye
He ditched her Valentines Day
And her birthday too
But she couldn't say goodbye
They went for a drive
He broke her heart
He actually said goodbye
Alone in her room
She relieved her pain
And she began to cry
They found her in the morning
With blood on her sleeve
And a note next to her bed
"He broke my heart
When you find this I'll be dead
Please tell him it's the final goodbye" [comments] => 2 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 48 [informant] => jesika [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

The Final Goodbye

Contributed by jesika on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 02:20:16 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

He said I love you
He said I hate you
He never said goodbye
Her tears were shed
In the dark in bed
And she never said goodbye
He ditched her Valentines Day
And her birthday too
But she couldn't say goodbye
They went for a drive
He broke her heart
He actually said goodbye
Alone in her room
She relieved her pain
And she began to cry
They found her in the morning
With blood on her sleeve
And a note next to her bed
"He broke my heart
When you find this I'll be dead
Please tell him it's the final goodbye"

Copyright © jesika ... [ 2004-08-13 02:20:16]
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Re: The Final Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 02:30:29 AM AEST
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awwwwww this almost made me cry so touching
Michelle

Re: The Final Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 06:11:03 AM AEST
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a very sad poem, it lso touched me *hugs*

pixie xx

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