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Array ( [sid] => 59957 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Drowning The Infants In Our Dreams [time] => 2004-08-12 23:40:51 [hometext] => this is for all the people who were never accepted as they were... be yourself disregarding what everyone has to say... God will love you the way you are... [bodytext] => like the father who kills his son in body
you kill me in soul
like the crowd that ever surrounds you
i am never alone

like the mother that ignores her daughter
you chisel my heart
like the people that mock my feelings
you break me apart

like the brother who kills his brother in fields
you beat me to the ground
like the sister who murders you in words to friends
im kicked when im down

like the teacher who taught me my stupidity
you laugh at me to
like the pastor who damned me to the pits of hell
you slaughter my dreams

like the "best friends" i thought i had all these years
you mock my best intentions
like the world around me who hates the way i am
you cant accept my complications [comments] => 5 [counter] => 225 [topic] => 48 [informant] => abnormalpunk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Drowning The Infants In Our Dreams

Contributed by abnormalpunk on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 11:40:51 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



like the father who kills his son in body
you kill me in soul
like the crowd that ever surrounds you
i am never alone

like the mother that ignores her daughter
you chisel my heart
like the people that mock my feelings
you break me apart

like the brother who kills his brother in fields
you beat me to the ground
like the sister who murders you in words to friends
im kicked when im down

like the teacher who taught me my stupidity
you laugh at me to
like the pastor who damned me to the pits of hell
you slaughter my dreams

like the "best friends" i thought i had all these years
you mock my best intentions
like the world around me who hates the way i am
you cant accept my complications




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Re: Drowning The Infants In Our Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by WestCPunk on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 11:44:31 PM AEST
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That was pretty deep and i can relate to it a lot great job keep it up!
Shelbi


Re: Drowning The Infants In Our Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 12:07:37 AM AEST
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A bit sad but written well. I don't think too much of them preachers that damn u to hell either.
U r so rite that God luvs us as is.
Great job.
huggs, luv, smiles,
emy


Re: Drowning The Infants In Our Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 02:07:07 AM AEST
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intense sad write I say to hell with all those ppl if they cant love you for just the way you are we all reach a crossroad in our life where we ask ourselves are these people really worth it? A great write!
Ps I told someone tonight to come over and take lessons from my dog on unconditional love that made them shut their face!
Michelle


Re: Drowning The Infants In Our Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by kalika_vidya on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 03:12:02 AM AEST
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this world is filled with many harsh realities.
welldone..k


Re: Drowning The Infants In Our Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by ArkAngelGabriell on Wednesday, 9th March 2011 @ 08:09:02 AM AEST
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Nice execution. Bravo




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